On My Birthday
Through The Eyes of a Child contest entry4 total reviews
Comment from Rachelle Allen
Whoa. That's mighty chilling. Hopefully, it can be a wake-up call to those who need it. It makes my heart ache, which means you did a superior job with the set-up and delivery of your plot. Your dialogue was completely real, too. This seems like a leader for this contest. May you boogie down to the winner's circle!!
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2023
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Whoa. That's mighty chilling. Hopefully, it can be a wake-up call to those who need it. It makes my heart ache, which means you did a superior job with the set-up and delivery of your plot. Your dialogue was completely real, too. This seems like a leader for this contest. May you boogie down to the winner's circle!!
Comment Written 16-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2023
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Thank you for the great review, Rache. At least it tied for third. Lol. I was in one of my moods again. Haha. I'm glad you liked the piece.
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Ron
Comment from country ranch writer
Poor kid are you sure he was on fan Story? The must be other reasons behind the break up that you know about. Some parents just keep the reasons to their self. I am sure of it.sorry your birthday was so messed up for sure. So sorry.maybe ask your mom what's going on?
Saturday1/14/2023.
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2023
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Poor kid are you sure he was on fan Story? The must be other reasons behind the break up that you know about. Some parents just keep the reasons to their self. I am sure of it.sorry your birthday was so messed up for sure. So sorry.maybe ask your mom what's going on?
Saturday1/14/2023.
Comment Written 14-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2023
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Thank you for the great review, Country. I'm just being silly. Haha. I really appreciate the gracious stars. Have yourself a wonderful rest of your weekend.
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Comment from Ginda Simpson
Okay, we have been warned! Oh my gosh, the last line just makes this story. As your story unfolds, we sense it is not going to end well. What do you have to say for yourself, Fanstory?
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2023
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Okay, we have been warned! Oh my gosh, the last line just makes this story. As your story unfolds, we sense it is not going to end well. What do you have to say for yourself, Fanstory?
Comment Written 14-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2023
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Hahaha. Thank you for the great review, Ginda. I couldn't help myself. Lol. I really appreciate the generous stars. Have yourself a wonderful rest of your weekend.
Comment from royowen
Fortunately I was never on fanstory when my kids were growing up, but still I've got time for my grandkids. Heh heh, but one wonders how many writing widows and widowers there are. Beautifully written my friend, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2023
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Fortunately I was never on fanstory when my kids were growing up, but still I've got time for my grandkids. Heh heh, but one wonders how many writing widows and widowers there are. Beautifully written my friend, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 14-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2023
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Thank you for the great review, Roy. I was just in one of those moods. Lol. I really appreciate the generous stars, friend. I'm glad you liked this silly piece.
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I can understand well done
