haiku (color come home)
haiku club post - seasons18 total reviews
Comment from karenina
Great picture...the image you presented and the words you "painted" with.
It's mid-January and here in New England my thoughts are racing ahead to April.
Sigh.
A bit of serenity to hold me over!
Thanks for this!
Karenina
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2023
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Great picture...the image you presented and the words you "painted" with.
It's mid-January and here in New England my thoughts are racing ahead to April.
Sigh.
A bit of serenity to hold me over!
Thanks for this!
Karenina
Comment Written 20-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2023
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Thanks for the nice review and all the stars, Karenina. I'm glad you liked it. I think we all want Spring to be here.
Joan
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Winter...If I were master seasonal planner I'd make it --oh, about a week long. Christmas through New years!
HO HO HO!
Comment from Boogienights
Very nicely done! An ode to spring I believe, which has been mis a ingredient from my life for quite a while now. We are in the dead of winter, I long so much for warmer weather. Thanks for sharing. :)
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2023
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Very nicely done! An ode to spring I believe, which has been mis a ingredient from my life for quite a while now. We are in the dead of winter, I long so much for warmer weather. Thanks for sharing. :)
Comment Written 20-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2023
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Thanks for the nice review and all the stars. I am right with you there, Sharon. I want Spring as soon as possible.
Joan
Comment from Ginda Simpson
In this delightful Haiku you have evoked the very essence of springtime renewal and joy. And your word choices are perfect, especially "sprouting joy," Nice job.
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2023
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In this delightful Haiku you have evoked the very essence of springtime renewal and joy. And your word choices are perfect, especially "sprouting joy," Nice job.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2023
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Thanks for the kind review and generous rating, Ginda.
Joan
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your haiku read well, DP. I liked the personification of
colors. Your lines were correct in syllable count. Your
words were well thought out and painted a mental picture
for readers. Yes, Spring is as you described. I liked the little
while duck in the art choice.
Thanks for sharing, Jan
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2023
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Your haiku read well, DP. I liked the personification of
colors. Your lines were correct in syllable count. Your
words were well thought out and painted a mental picture
for readers. Yes, Spring is as you described. I liked the little
while duck in the art choice.
Thanks for sharing, Jan
Comment Written 19-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2023
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Thanks, Jan, for you thorough review. I am glad you liked it.
Joan
Comment from royowen
Although the human skillsets are much better with mixing colour now, still the natural, vibrant colours of spring, are still superior, but the artists mix the colour of their emotions differently and well. Beautifully written, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2023
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Although the human skillsets are much better with mixing colour now, still the natural, vibrant colours of spring, are still superior, but the artists mix the colour of their emotions differently and well. Beautifully written, blessings Roy
Comment Written 19-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2023
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Thanks for the encouraging words and all the stars, Roy. You are right about the natural colors being better than the painted ones.
Joan
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Bless you Joan
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice artwork and presentation, Joan.
-You did a good job with the haiku.
-Effective nature and seasonal imagery
with the sun, "cool rains" and the
use of "sprouting" that makes
a very good satori line.
-You paint a good word picture
about the joy of the season.
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2023
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-Nice artwork and presentation, Joan.
-You did a good job with the haiku.
-Effective nature and seasonal imagery
with the sun, "cool rains" and the
use of "sprouting" that makes
a very good satori line.
-You paint a good word picture
about the joy of the season.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2023
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Thanks for the concise yet thorough review, Pam.
Joan
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You are very welcome, Joan.
Comment from Karyn2
I like the unique idea that "colours come home". As though they have been away for a season and are arriving back to a place they belong. I really like the way you have expressed that. "Sprouting joy" is also really beautiful evoking happiness in the arrival of spring. Well written.
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2023
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I like the unique idea that "colours come home". As though they have been away for a season and are arriving back to a place they belong. I really like the way you have expressed that. "Sprouting joy" is also really beautiful evoking happiness in the arrival of spring. Well written.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2023
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Thanks for your continuing support, Karyn.
Joan
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This sounds like a poem for the Spring when colour pokes through the snow and delight us with magnificent blooms against a backdrop of grey Winter days, a fine write Joan, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2023
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This sounds like a poem for the Spring when colour pokes through the snow and delight us with magnificent blooms against a backdrop of grey Winter days, a fine write Joan, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 19-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2023
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Thanks for the review, Dolly. It could be Spring or Summer. But I guess mostly Spring.
Joan
Comment from JT traveller
The flow and content is great, vivid imagery, evocative of Spring. I enjoyed the poem and the chosen illustration; they work well together. A good effort. Well done. I enjoyed reading it.
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2023
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The flow and content is great, vivid imagery, evocative of Spring. I enjoyed the poem and the chosen illustration; they work well together. A good effort. Well done. I enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written 18-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2023
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Thanks for taking the time to read and review this poem. I am glad you enjoyed it.
Joan
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Who could not enjoy it? Thankyou.
Comment from jake cosmos aller
nice poem about the springtime a season of color, and renewal after the gray colors of the winter season. God I am sick of this cold winter already ready for Spring to come.
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2023
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nice poem about the springtime a season of color, and renewal after the gray colors of the winter season. God I am sick of this cold winter already ready for Spring to come.
Comment Written 18-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2023
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Thanks for your kind words and high rating, Jake. I was sick of it after the first big snow.
Joan
