With Harmony
It will create intense peace......29 total reviews
Comment from Kaiku
What a beautiful work of art and your 6 words compliment it beautifully. I would have one suggestion, center your 6 words to the pic so that the eye stays centered as well. Don`t want to miss a thing.
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2023
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What a beautiful work of art and your 6 words compliment it beautifully. I would have one suggestion, center your 6 words to the pic so that the eye stays centered as well. Don`t want to miss a thing.
Comment Written 02-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2023
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Hi Kaiku, thank you so much for the excellent review. Also for
your kind comments and great suggestion! I just centered it and
it made a big difference! Hope you are having a great day!....Maria
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Nice
Comment from Frank Malley
Harmony is an interesting subject, both musically and socially. The outcomes are more reliable musically; if you know what you're doing, the harmony will work. In contrast, I don't think that social harmony has ever existed for more than a century or maybe two, and profound peace was scarce even then. Harmony uses rules, and humanity isn't a trustworthy follower of rules, so profound peace may elude us probably most of the time.
This piece reminds me of Zen koans, which I'd have to look up to refresh my sense of them. These six words are full of good will, but less full of good poetry. Nice ideas aren't the same as poetry.
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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2023
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Harmony is an interesting subject, both musically and socially. The outcomes are more reliable musically; if you know what you're doing, the harmony will work. In contrast, I don't think that social harmony has ever existed for more than a century or maybe two, and profound peace was scarce even then. Harmony uses rules, and humanity isn't a trustworthy follower of rules, so profound peace may elude us probably most of the time.
This piece reminds me of Zen koans, which I'd have to look up to refresh my sense of them. These six words are full of good will, but less full of good poetry. Nice ideas aren't the same as poetry.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 01-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2023
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Hi Frank, thank you for the review and your comments.
Have a great day!....Maria
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All the best, Maria. Frank
Comment from barbara.wilkey
The artwork you chose for this contest entry is perfect. Thank you for sharing the artwork and the entry with us. Yes, if we can create harmony, peace will follow. I enjoyed reading and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2023
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The artwork you chose for this contest entry is perfect. Thank you for sharing the artwork and the entry with us. Yes, if we can create harmony, peace will follow. I enjoyed reading and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 01-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2023
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Hi Barbara, thank you so much for the excellent review and your
wonderful comments. Have a great day!....Maria
Comment from Jesse James Doty
I can find no better six words to describe how peace can immerge from harmony. This speaks so well about the imminent troubles we all have in our lives and how harmony can bring peace for all of us to enjoy.
Thanks for sharing and I love the picture by Cindy Sue Truman she is remarkable!
Jesse
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2023
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I can find no better six words to describe how peace can immerge from harmony. This speaks so well about the imminent troubles we all have in our lives and how harmony can bring peace for all of us to enjoy.
Thanks for sharing and I love the picture by Cindy Sue Truman she is remarkable!
Jesse
Comment Written 01-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2023
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Hi Jesse, thank you so much for the excellent review and your
wonderful comments. I am so glad you enjoyed the poem.
Have a great day!....Maria
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You too, Maria!
Comment from LJbutterfly
I agree with the message of your poem. Harmony guarantees peace. Put two or more people together, and complete harmony is a challenge. The color scheme of your presentation is well coordinated and the artwork and poem pair perfectly. Best wishes in the contest.
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2023
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I agree with the message of your poem. Harmony guarantees peace. Put two or more people together, and complete harmony is a challenge. The color scheme of your presentation is well coordinated and the artwork and poem pair perfectly. Best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 31-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2023
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Thank you so much for the excellent review and your kind
comments. Have a great rest of the week!.....Maria
Comment from Pam (respa)
-It is lovely artwork and nice presentation, Maria.
-You have used your six words well.
-Effective imagery and alliteration.
-A very good, positive message in your poem.
-It is important to achieve harmony in life
because there will be peace.
-A very good entry; good luck!!
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2023
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-It is lovely artwork and nice presentation, Maria.
-You have used your six words well.
-Effective imagery and alliteration.
-A very good, positive message in your poem.
-It is important to achieve harmony in life
because there will be peace.
-A very good entry; good luck!!
Comment Written 31-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2023
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Hi Pam, thank you so much for the excellent review and as always
your exceptional comments. Have a great rest of the week!...Maria
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You are very welcome, Maria, and you do the same.
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is an absolutely beautifully written poem. . A very colourful and beautiful presentation . I love your photo choice. Very well done. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2023
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This is an absolutely beautifully written poem. . A very colourful and beautiful presentation . I love your photo choice. Very well done. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2023
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Hi Joanne, thank you again for the 6 start review and wonderful
comments. Have a great rest of the week!...Maria
Comment from susand3022
Hi Maria,
I liked this Harmonic piece. :)
It's alliteration was perfectly peaceful, and it's picture was perfectly purple. ;)
It is a prettily pleasant poem presented here.
Susan :)
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2023
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Hi Maria,
I liked this Harmonic piece. :)
It's alliteration was perfectly peaceful, and it's picture was perfectly purple. ;)
It is a prettily pleasant poem presented here.
Susan :)
Comment Written 29-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2023
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Hi Susan, thank you so much for the excellent review and your
exceptional comments. I am so glad you enjoyed the poem...Maria
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
This is a sweet 6-word poem entry. The text is a good size. I like that it is a color. The color coordinates well with your visual.
I feel the poem would present better with "create harmony" on one line and the rest on the second line. I would also remove the caps if left on one line. It makes the last two words appear insignificant when they are critical to the full meaning. The sentence makes sense and is relatable.
The visual works well. If the contest is not over, good luck.
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2023
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This is a sweet 6-word poem entry. The text is a good size. I like that it is a color. The color coordinates well with your visual.
I feel the poem would present better with "create harmony" on one line and the rest on the second line. I would also remove the caps if left on one line. It makes the last two words appear insignificant when they are critical to the full meaning. The sentence makes sense and is relatable.
The visual works well. If the contest is not over, good luck.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2023
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Hi Sandra, thank you so much for the excellent review. And also
your great comments and suggestions. I hope you are doing well.
Have a great rest of the week!....Maria
Comment from jacquelyn popp
I enjoyed reading your poem. Beautiful illustration photo and went perfectly with your poem to make it even more enjoyable. Your words said so much in yet so few words. It would be so wonderful if everyone were together in harmony, and or everything, and I also feel that through harmony, peace will emerge. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2023
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I enjoyed reading your poem. Beautiful illustration photo and went perfectly with your poem to make it even more enjoyable. Your words said so much in yet so few words. It would be so wonderful if everyone were together in harmony, and or everything, and I also feel that through harmony, peace will emerge. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 27-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2023
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Hi Jacqueline, thank you so much for excellent review and your
exceptional words. I am so pleased you liked the poem.
Have a great Sunday!.....Maria
