With Harmony
It will create intense peace......29 total reviews
Comment from royowen
There's nothing worse than a band that doesn't know or understand what being "in tune" means, or rather can't tune their instruments to others. One gets a very discordant group of musicians, in 64 piece orchestra with one musician "off pitch" you will hear that one instrument rather than the others. Beautifully written, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2023
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There's nothing worse than a band that doesn't know or understand what being "in tune" means, or rather can't tune their instruments to others. One gets a very discordant group of musicians, in 64 piece orchestra with one musician "off pitch" you will hear that one instrument rather than the others. Beautifully written, blessings Roy
Comment Written 27-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2023
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Hi Roy, thank you so much for excellent review and exceptional
comments for my poem. I am so glad you enjoyed the poem.
Have a great Sunday!....Maria
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Most welcome
Comment from Rachel Jamerson1
You have shared a very important truth. Harmony does and will result in peace just as contention produces unwanted results on all fronts. Thanks for sharing
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2023
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You have shared a very important truth. Harmony does and will result in peace just as contention produces unwanted results on all fronts. Thanks for sharing
Comment Written 24-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2023
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Hi Rachel, thank you so much for the excellent review and exceptional comments. I am so pleased you liked the poem and defined harmony so well. Have a great Sunday!....Maria
Comment from patcelaw
When we find harmony with nature around us, and with ourselves, we can be very creative and write beautiful things like you have written here. May you have a blessed day, and God bless. Patricia.
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2023
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When we find harmony with nature around us, and with ourselves, we can be very creative and write beautiful things like you have written here. May you have a blessed day, and God bless. Patricia.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2023
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Hi Pat, thank you so much for the excellent review and your kind
comments. Have a great Sunday!....Maria
Comment from PoemsOfDD
This is a good entry for the 6 word poem contest. True words spoken.
I love the colours in the beautiful wonderland photo attached to enhance this thoughtful and reflective line. Good job and best of luck in the competition.
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2023
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This is a good entry for the 6 word poem contest. True words spoken.
I love the colours in the beautiful wonderland photo attached to enhance this thoughtful and reflective line. Good job and best of luck in the competition.
Comment Written 21-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2023
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Thank you so much for the excellent review and wonderful comments. Have a great week!.....Maria
Comment from Nicki Nance
What a sweet submission. I, too, worked many years in the field of addiction. I see the poetic value of this simple, well-written snippet of a poem. More important, I read it as a recovery slogan that is so much prettier than the old standards,
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2023
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What a sweet submission. I, too, worked many years in the field of addiction. I see the poetic value of this simple, well-written snippet of a poem. More important, I read it as a recovery slogan that is so much prettier than the old standards,
Comment Written 21-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2023
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Hi Nicki, thank you so much for the excellent review and your
wonderful comments. I agree I liked you comment about it being
a recovery slogan! Have a great week!....Maria
Comment from Debbie Pope
I like your message. Rings true to me. We need harmony of the soul and harmony of our surroundings. With harmony comes restful sleep and that leads to all sorts of wonderful things.
Well said.
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2023
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I like your message. Rings true to me. We need harmony of the soul and harmony of our surroundings. With harmony comes restful sleep and that leads to all sorts of wonderful things.
Well said.
Comment Written 21-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2023
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Hi Debbie, thank so much for the excellent review and wonderful
comments. Have a great week!....Maria
Comment from G0dd0ll
I struggle with these shorter poems myself. But you've created a nice picture with your choice in words here. No need for rhyme is apparent. Nice job.
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2023
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I struggle with these shorter poems myself. But you've created a nice picture with your choice in words here. No need for rhyme is apparent. Nice job.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2023
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Hi, thank you so much for the excellent review and your great
comments. Hope you are having a great day!....Maria
Comment from Ginda Simpson
I am always amazed at the power of words, especially when so few, carefully chosen, can say so much. This is an excellent example. Well done. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2023
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I am always amazed at the power of words, especially when so few, carefully chosen, can say so much. This is an excellent example. Well done. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2023
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Hi Ginda, thank you again for the 6 star rating and for your
wonderful comments. Have a great week!....Maria
Comment from Faith Williams
I like the idea that balance and harmony will lead to peace. But I also like the word 'create' because harmony doesn't just happen, we need to work at it, to build it and then, peace rises from that world created. Thanks so much for sharing, and best wishes in the contest.
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2023
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I like the idea that balance and harmony will lead to peace. But I also like the word 'create' because harmony doesn't just happen, we need to work at it, to build it and then, peace rises from that world created. Thanks so much for sharing, and best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2023
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Hi Faith, thank you so much for the excellent review and your
exceptional comments. Yes, I agree so much with you - harmony takes work and then peace will follow! Have a great week!...Maria
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your presentation for the contest was beautiful,
Harmony. I liked the color scheme, the art choice,
and your great message. That message is so true
for all.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes in the contest, Jan
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2023
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Your presentation for the contest was beautiful,
Harmony. I liked the color scheme, the art choice,
and your great message. That message is so true
for all.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes in the contest, Jan
Comment Written 19-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2023
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Hi Jan, thank you so much for the excellent review and your
wonderful comments. Have a great week!....Maria
