If you are Lost
A 3-5-3 Poem9 total reviews
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your words plus art choice paired perfectly, Kahpot.
Great job with the syllable count per line. Your lines
flowed smoothly and created great imagery. I liked
the simplicity of the words which gave readers much
to think about.
Thanks for sharing, Jan
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2023
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Your words plus art choice paired perfectly, Kahpot.
Great job with the syllable count per line. Your lines
flowed smoothly and created great imagery. I liked
the simplicity of the words which gave readers much
to think about.
Thanks for sharing, Jan
Comment Written 19-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2023
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Thank you for such wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
This is a good entry in the 3-5-3 contest. The text is a great size. Centering the text made it more prominent. The message is clearly stated. The visual fits well. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2023
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This is a good entry in the 3-5-3 contest. The text is a great size. Centering the text made it more prominent. The message is clearly stated. The visual fits well. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2023
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Thank you very much
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You are welcome.
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Jesus is by our side no matter where we walk or where we go. I like your poem. We need inspiration every day of the week. He is always ready with His arms wide open.
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2023
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Jesus is by our side no matter where we walk or where we go. I like your poem. We need inspiration every day of the week. He is always ready with His arms wide open.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2023
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Thank you so very much
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Wonderful entry for the 3-5-3 writing prompt contest.
Good syllables count and connection between lines.
Excellent imagery and presentation.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2023
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Wonderful entry for the 3-5-3 writing prompt contest.
Good syllables count and connection between lines.
Excellent imagery and presentation.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus
Comment Written 18-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2023
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Thank you very much
Comment from JT traveller
Well written and composed poem. It gives me hope and renews my faith. The few words speak volumes. Thankyou for sharing your thoughts. I particularly enjoyed your writing.
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2023
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Well written and composed poem. It gives me hope and renews my faith. The few words speak volumes. Thankyou for sharing your thoughts. I particularly enjoyed your writing.
Comment Written 18-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2023
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Thank you for your wonderful review
Comment from papa55mike
I don't know how people can survive without knowing the Lord. His guidance is everything to me. What a wonderfully written poem.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2023
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I don't know how people can survive without knowing the Lord. His guidance is everything to me. What a wonderfully written poem.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 18-Jan-2023
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Thank you very much
Comment from Kaiku
Yes, your 3-5-3 is a nice spiritual poem. Honestly, I can't really critique as the use of words are appropriate, syllable count is good and it represents your narrative. Good luck in the writing prompt.
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2023
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Yes, your 3-5-3 is a nice spiritual poem. Honestly, I can't really critique as the use of words are appropriate, syllable count is good and it represents your narrative. Good luck in the writing prompt.
Comment Written 18-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2023
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Thank you very much
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Of course
Comment from JanPerry
Yes, I like the words they ring true of our Lord. Some capitals would be nice and I dont like this bright blue. A subtle colour is better since Jesus is not a show off!
Otherwise, a lovely tribute.
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2023
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Yes, I like the words they ring true of our Lord. Some capitals would be nice and I dont like this bright blue. A subtle colour is better since Jesus is not a show off!
Otherwise, a lovely tribute.
Comment Written 18-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2023
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Thank you, one does not have to show off to be remembered
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A strong faithful write with support and belief in every word, I enjoyed your uplifting and positive theme here, a fine write for the contest, good luck, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2023
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A strong faithful write with support and belief in every word, I enjoyed your uplifting and positive theme here, a fine write for the contest, good luck, love Dolly x
Comment Written 18-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2023
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Thank you very much
