Aging With Poetry
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Comment from Reese Turner
That is me. Putting happy thoughts together is meter and rhyme is most gratifying and enjoyable. My wife opines that we could use more money so a hobby that sells would be better. But, I am stuck on poetry.
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That is me. Putting happy thoughts together is meter and rhyme is most gratifying and enjoyable. My wife opines that we could use more money so a hobby that sells would be better. But, I am stuck on poetry.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2023
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
I like your simple way of writing poetry. It is always so closely knit to the wants and needs of personal writing growth. I just got done writing a review about opinions. Several stop writing because they don't like to read negative opinions.
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I like your simple way of writing poetry. It is always so closely knit to the wants and needs of personal writing growth. I just got done writing a review about opinions. Several stop writing because they don't like to read negative opinions.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2023
Comment from Spitfire
Good work, jaybird. This is one of your best. Writing poetry is no effort to the body and will not cause aches or pains and it can impress a woman. Loved 'new found toy'.
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Good work, jaybird. This is one of your best. Writing poetry is no effort to the body and will not cause aches or pains and it can impress a woman. Loved 'new found toy'.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2023
Comment from TDLRasmar
Alright, I am old school and like reading poems that rhyme. Is your profile correct and you were born 1925? I am impressed. How do you get around. I am a couple decades younger and can see that I am slowing down.
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Alright, I am old school and like reading poems that rhyme. Is your profile correct and you were born 1925? I am impressed. How do you get around. I am a couple decades younger and can see that I am slowing down.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2023
Comment from Verna Cole Mitchell
What a fun poem. I'm glad to see how much poetry has added to your life, but I'm guessing that fun-loving, handsome, turn-the-women's heads is still in there somewhere.
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What a fun poem. I'm glad to see how much poetry has added to your life, but I'm guessing that fun-loving, handsome, turn-the-women's heads is still in there somewhere.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2023
Comment from Heather Knight
You are right, poetry makes you think. It's like a puzzle. You have to choose the right words and put them in the right place.
I'm glad you enjoy writing so much. It's important to do things we like.
Thanks for sharing.
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You are right, poetry makes you think. It's like a puzzle. You have to choose the right words and put them in the right place.
I'm glad you enjoy writing so much. It's important to do things we like.
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2023
Comment from Ulla
Hi Jay. I think that sounds like a wonderful plan. I, for one, finds much joy in reading your poems. There's always a word of wisdom there. This one not being an exception. All best, Ulla:)))
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Hi Jay. I think that sounds like a wonderful plan. I, for one, finds much joy in reading your poems. There's always a word of wisdom there. This one not being an exception. All best, Ulla:)))
Comment Written 20-Jan-2023
Comment from Boogienights
I'm so glad that you find such solace in writing. I feel the same as you, I expect I will continue until such time as I can't hold a pen. Thank you for sharing. :)
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I'm so glad that you find such solace in writing. I feel the same as you, I expect I will continue until such time as I can't hold a pen. Thank you for sharing. :)
Comment Written 20-Jan-2023
Comment from Teri7
Jaybird, This is a very nice poem you have penned about aging with poetry. You used very good descriptive words You used very good descriptive and rhyming words. Blessings, Teri
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Jaybird, This is a very nice poem you have penned about aging with poetry. You used very good descriptive words You used very good descriptive and rhyming words. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 19-Jan-2023
Comment from MissMerri
So right you are, Jay! There is something so joyful and satisfying about putting words together and creating something pleasing and meaningful. I think there are so many on this site who will say, Yes! We know exactly what you're talking about! Thanks for sharing your wonderfully creative words with us. I always enjoy reading your poems. MM
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So right you are, Jay! There is something so joyful and satisfying about putting words together and creating something pleasing and meaningful. I think there are so many on this site who will say, Yes! We know exactly what you're talking about! Thanks for sharing your wonderfully creative words with us. I always enjoy reading your poems. MM
Comment Written 19-Jan-2023
