Comment from kahpot

Excellent

I believe when it comes to love and or initiating said procedure men are the weaker sex, maybe because back in my day we did all the asking-so got all the rejections, an excellent story, very well written****kahpot

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 19-Jan-2023

Thank you

Comment from Earl Corp

Excellent

This was a good entry into the flash fiction contest. I like the twist at the end and it left it up to the reader's imagination what swarm of sparingly clad women did with our hero. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 19-Jan-2023

Yes, indeed. A hero. Precisely.
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Comment from Douglas Goff

Excellent

Ain't she but a lovely lass! And the lady in the picture isn't to bad either. Very nice work here, Tom. I think this is a great Flash Fiction Contest entry. It should compete well.

So, five sisters, huh. Bet you got to hit on a lot of there friends? See where my mind goes.

Love your bio by the way. It is open and honest. Good luck my friend!

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 19-Jan-2023

Thanks for getting to know me a bit. I'm better from afar, I've been told. A man with a concealed smile. Hard to figure.

reply by Douglas Goff on 19-Jan-2023

I like you, but what choice do I have. The women seem to outnumber us on here 10 to 1 (LOL)

Comment from leather

Excellent

This is a great read and a well-written entry. I like how it was constructed as it moved from start to finish. It should do well in the contest. Just to remind you, your writing is one of your assets.
Best wishes.
P.S. I'm out of six stars, sorry.

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 19-Jan-2023

Well, wasn't that nice to say. I have an asset. Hmmm. People in the know may say otherwise. :-)

reply by leather on 19-Jan-2023

Check them out.

Comment from mermaids

Excellent

Your story is smooth and holds the reader's attention. You surprised me at the end, I imagine scantily clad females would have an impact on a man. Excellent flash fiction tale.

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 Comment Written 19-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 19-Jan-2023

Hooray
Not sure how I Develop story lines other than realizing a single line in a poem or editorial or tv/movies has me tickling my keyboard and the rest flows like the Styx