Regrets
2/6/2 Contest15 total reviews
Comment from Nicki Nance
Sad and simple. You really capture the subjective experience of regret at a single moment - sunset. You told a big story with a small poem. Excellent choice of topic, words, and the artwork that suggests regrets make one feel small.
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2023
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Sad and simple. You really capture the subjective experience of regret at a single moment - sunset. You told a big story with a small poem. Excellent choice of topic, words, and the artwork that suggests regrets make one feel small.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2023
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Thank you
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice artwork and presentation.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-I agree with your note, too.
-The imagery paints a good word picture
of the sunset, and your feelings as you view it.
-A good concluding line shows the specific feeling.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2023
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-Nice artwork and presentation.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-I agree with your note, too.
-The imagery paints a good word picture
of the sunset, and your feelings as you view it.
-A good concluding line shows the specific feeling.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2023
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Thank you once again
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You are welcome.
Comment from Sally Law
This is fabulous in this super short 2-6-2 form, mystery poet! A sure win in my eyes. Sending you my best today as always, and my very best wishes for the upcoming vote.
Sally :))
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2023
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This is fabulous in this super short 2-6-2 form, mystery poet! A sure win in my eyes. Sending you my best today as always, and my very best wishes for the upcoming vote.
Sally :))
Comment Written 19-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2023
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Thank you for this lovely review.
Comment from prettybluebirds
This poem is short and to the point. To tell a story, or convey a message in so few words, takes skill. The artwork is perfect for the writing. I wish you worlds of luck in contest.
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reply by the author on 19-Jan-2023
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This poem is short and to the point. To tell a story, or convey a message in so few words, takes skill. The artwork is perfect for the writing. I wish you worlds of luck in contest.
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Comment Written 19-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2023
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I dearly respect your opinion. Thank you so much for "getting" this tiny piece.
Comment from mermaids
Excellent short poem that says volumes. We can feel the lost love and the regret it brings forth. Excellent use of the 2-6-2 form that creates feelings and emotions.
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reply by the author on 19-Jan-2023
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Excellent short poem that says volumes. We can feel the lost love and the regret it brings forth. Excellent use of the 2-6-2 form that creates feelings and emotions.
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Comment Written 19-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2023
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Thank you for this excellent review. I really love word economy . Hugs
