Us
One Word contest entry3 total reviews
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
This is a good attempt at a one-word poem. However, U.S. is an abbreviation and not a word. If you were going to use the abbreviation for our nation at least add the capital A for USA. The visual says a lot on its own. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2023
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This is a good attempt at a one-word poem. However, U.S. is an abbreviation and not a word. If you were going to use the abbreviation for our nation at least add the capital A for USA. The visual says a lot on its own. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2023
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I would have had the title and the word switched but the site doesn't let us use only capital letters in the title. That's why it's the way it is. Thanks got the review.
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Okay, you are welcome.
Comment from PoemsOfDD
This is a good entry for the one word play contest.
The picture is a good reflection of how America - or indeed the whole world - is today. Slowly sinking from recession and depression. A reflective political piece and a great entry. Best of luck in the competition.
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2023
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This is a good entry for the one word play contest.
The picture is a good reflection of how America - or indeed the whole world - is today. Slowly sinking from recession and depression. A reflective political piece and a great entry. Best of luck in the competition.
Comment Written 21-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2023
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Thank you for the great review, PODD. Yes, we're headed down an aperture we'll most likely find too hard to climb out of. I really appreciate the generous stars and good luck wishes, friend. I'm glad you liked the piece.
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You are welcome. All my pleasure :-)
Good luck!
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You are welcome. All my pleasure :-)
Good luck!
Comment from Regina Elliott
Dear poet, the combination of
a sinking ship with the
American flag and your one
word poem says volumes of
the state of the U.S., with
high food prices, high housing
costs, soaring medical and
dental costs, the list goes on.
This is a mighty contender
for the contest. Best wishes.
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2023
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Dear poet, the combination of
a sinking ship with the
American flag and your one
word poem says volumes of
the state of the U.S., with
high food prices, high housing
costs, soaring medical and
dental costs, the list goes on.
This is a mighty contender
for the contest. Best wishes.
Comment Written 21-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2023
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Thank you so much for the great review, Regina. Yes, we are in a world of hurt at this pace. Knocking on the top door of National debt again...this surely can't be good. I really appreciate the generous stars and good luck wishes, R. Thank you again.
