Bread
15 minute free verse challenge11 total reviews
Comment from Sally Law
This is very good in short verse free write. Full of metaphors of a tough, unyielding loaf. I have resembled this at times. Wonderfully penned and beautifully illustrated.
Sending you my best today as always.
Sal XOs
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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2023
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This is very good in short verse free write. Full of metaphors of a tough, unyielding loaf. I have resembled this at times. Wonderfully penned and beautifully illustrated.
Sending you my best today as always.
Sal XOs
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Comment Written 22-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2023
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Thank you so much, Sal :)
Best wishes as always, Debra x
