Blue
Taking the wrong path15 total reviews
Comment from Douglas Goff
I have blue eyes... just wanted to throw that out there! LOL.
Well, Heather this was quite the saucy dish wasn't it.
CheTing sounds like too much hurt, turmoil, guilt, and heartbreak to me. Plus I don't want to split my Darth Vader doll collection up in. A divorce!
Nice write up.
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2023
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I have blue eyes... just wanted to throw that out there! LOL.
Well, Heather this was quite the saucy dish wasn't it.
CheTing sounds like too much hurt, turmoil, guilt, and heartbreak to me. Plus I don't want to split my Darth Vader doll collection up in. A divorce!
Nice write up.
Comment Written 22-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2023
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LOL!
Thanks so much for reading. Have a lovely day.
Comment from RodG
Some guys apparently have the ability to mesmerize young married women with their eyes and their lies. It's good to know the Speaker overcame temptation if not her guilt. But you keep telling us his eyes were blue until this line: His grey eyes of steel bore into me.
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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2023
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Some guys apparently have the ability to mesmerize young married women with their eyes and their lies. It's good to know the Speaker overcame temptation if not her guilt. But you keep telling us his eyes were blue until this line: His grey eyes of steel bore into me.
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Comment Written 22-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2023
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Thanks so much for reading. Have a lovely day.
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
you have written a powerful tale here of the overcoming of temptation. Using the chang in eye colour as an indication of a change in mood was a clever choice. kay
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2023
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you have written a powerful tale here of the overcoming of temptation. Using the chang in eye colour as an indication of a change in mood was a clever choice. kay
Comment Written 22-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2023
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Thanks so much for reading. Have a lovely day. x
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Not all relationships work out and I hope you carried some good memories with you. I enjoyed the sentiment here. You have a double word at the beginning of like 4 Heather (when). Love Dolly
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2023
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Not all relationships work out and I hope you carried some good memories with you. I enjoyed the sentiment here. You have a double word at the beginning of like 4 Heather (when). Love Dolly
Comment Written 22-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2023
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Thanks so much for reading and for noticing the mistake, Christine. Have a lovely day. x
Comment from royowen
What a captivating post you've written here Maria, yes I've known love like that, and in the long run it wasn't reciprocal, I learnt about unrequited love at an early age, but didn't realise I'd dished it out too, then we learnt about the unconditionality of love, beautifully written Maria, blessings Roy
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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2023
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What a captivating post you've written here Maria, yes I've known love like that, and in the long run it wasn't reciprocal, I learnt about unrequited love at an early age, but didn't realise I'd dished it out too, then we learnt about the unconditionality of love, beautifully written Maria, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 22-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2023
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Thanks so much for reading, Roy. Have a lovely day.
