Heart Crafted Poems - 2023
Viewing comments for Chapter 7 "Storms"Musing of an old man
18 total reviews
Comment from Verna Cole Mitchell
This kind of poem is difficult, and you did a great job. I love the repetition of lines and all the imagery of sight and sound you included. The comparison of physical storm with emotional storm is done well.
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2023
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This kind of poem is difficult, and you did a great job. I love the repetition of lines and all the imagery of sight and sound you included. The comparison of physical storm with emotional storm is done well.
Comment Written 22-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2023
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Verna, thank you!
Comment from Janet Foor
Cascade poems are impressive and this is no exception. The repeating lines and in the right place and make sense too. Impressive!!!
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2023
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Cascade poems are impressive and this is no exception. The repeating lines and in the right place and make sense too. Impressive!!!
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 22-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2023
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Janet, thank you so much! 🙏🙏🎶🎶
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Hey, I rating it a five if for no other reason than the effort given for I myself couldn't even understand how to construct a cascade poem even with instruction. Bravo.
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2023
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Hey, I rating it a five if for no other reason than the effort given for I myself couldn't even understand how to construct a cascade poem even with instruction. Bravo.
Comment Written 22-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2023
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Tom,thanks!
Comment from Sally Law
Rain seems to be the theme in these Cascading poems. Some love the rain; others are done with it. I enjoyed your offering. Beautifully penned and illustrated as always, dear J. Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the challenge.
Sal XOs
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2023
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Rain seems to be the theme in these Cascading poems. Some love the rain; others are done with it. I enjoyed your offering. Beautifully penned and illustrated as always, dear J. Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the challenge.
Sal XOs
Comment Written 22-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2023
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Hi dear friend, thank you! 🙏🙏🎶🎶
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Most welcome! Have a lovely week! Sal :))
Comment from Douglas Goff
Great script and what an awesome picture to demonstrate winter's dark turmoil. But alas, Spring is upon us in just a few several weeks. Eeesh!
Thanks for sharing. This captured the season!
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2023
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Great script and what an awesome picture to demonstrate winter's dark turmoil. But alas, Spring is upon us in just a few several weeks. Eeesh!
Thanks for sharing. This captured the season!
Comment Written 22-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2023
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Douglas, thanks!
Comment from Paul McFarland
Good job with a (in my mind) very difficult form, Jim. Where did you come up with "ice cycles"? That's a unique use of words to represent "icicles".
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2023
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Good job with a (in my mind) very difficult form, Jim. Where did you come up with "ice cycles"? That's a unique use of words to represent "icicles".
Comment Written 22-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2023
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Paul, thank you!
Comment from royowen
Beautifully written my friend, one of the forms that I appreciate, because it's important that the verses stay on point with the repeated lines, it makes the poems relevant, beautifully written my friend, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2023
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Beautifully written my friend, one of the forms that I appreciate, because it's important that the verses stay on point with the repeated lines, it makes the poems relevant, beautifully written my friend, blessings Roy
Comment Written 22-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2023
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hello friend! Thank you very much!
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Most welcome
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
It sounds like you are truly fed up with the rain here? Good rhymes but the metre is inconsistent, I enjoyed the sentiment though, rain can be a trial, love Dolly x
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reply by the author on 22-Jan-2023
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It sounds like you are truly fed up with the rain here? Good rhymes but the metre is inconsistent, I enjoyed the sentiment though, rain can be a trial, love Dolly x
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Comment Written 22-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2023
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Thanks. Dolly I appreciate this comment but in the club contest meter was not a requirement, however I do realize this (meter) would enhance the flow. Have a super week!
