Cozy Comfort
Haiku club-humanity23 total reviews
Comment from Faith Williams
There is nothing like snuggling under blankets reading a good book and sipping hot chocolate. Their warmth infuses even the coldest nights. Thanks for sharing your heart-warming poem.
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2023
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There is nothing like snuggling under blankets reading a good book and sipping hot chocolate. Their warmth infuses even the coldest nights. Thanks for sharing your heart-warming poem.
Comment Written 31-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2023
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Thanks for reading and reviewing, Faith. Glad you liked it.
Joan
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
This is a perfect thought for today, DP. It's 23*.
Your haiku was well thought out and created
great imagery. The picture was perfect. I liked
the theme and the satori fir well.
Thanks for sharing, Jan
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2023
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This is a perfect thought for today, DP. It's 23*.
Your haiku was well thought out and created
great imagery. The picture was perfect. I liked
the theme and the satori fir well.
Thanks for sharing, Jan
Comment Written 31-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2023
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Thanks, Jan, for the continued support. It is 9 degrees here. With a wind chill of -4.
Joan
Comment from Jesse James Doty
Well done, my friend. The picture shows the beautiful fire roaring while you are reading a good book and sipping cocoa and it is the epitome of how the world can become a warm and safe place to be. This is excellently written and I hope you win the contest hands down.
Jesse
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2023
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Well done, my friend. The picture shows the beautiful fire roaring while you are reading a good book and sipping cocoa and it is the epitome of how the world can become a warm and safe place to be. This is excellently written and I hope you win the contest hands down.
Jesse
Comment Written 31-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2023
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Thanks, Jesse. I am glad you enjoyed it. It is not me for I have no fire place in my house. But reading nice covered and drinking cocoa could be me.
Joan
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Sounds good to me!
Jesse
Comment from Terry Broxson
This is a well-done haiku for your club entry. I have never been able to write a haiku that made sense. But those of you who can make it look so easy. In this case, I think a reader could make it personal to themselves simply by changing the word coca if that didn't fit them to say...coffee, tea, or even whiskey. Cheers! Excellent work. Terry.
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2023
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This is a well-done haiku for your club entry. I have never been able to write a haiku that made sense. But those of you who can make it look so easy. In this case, I think a reader could make it personal to themselves simply by changing the word coca if that didn't fit them to say...coffee, tea, or even whiskey. Cheers! Excellent work. Terry.
Comment Written 31-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2023
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Hi Terry. Thanks. You are right about the drink changing with the person of the emotions. I could go for cocoa, tea, or wine.
Joan
Comment from jenintorre
I really enjoyed your haiku poem. It certainly tells a complete story in very few words and your lovely choice of artwork is excellent. Best wishes. Jen.
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I really enjoyed your haiku poem. It certainly tells a complete story in very few words and your lovely choice of artwork is excellent. Best wishes. Jen.
Comment Written 31-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2023
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Thanks, Jen, for reading and reviewing my haiku. It is much appreciated.
Joan
Comment from jmdg1954
I'm all in with this with the exception of hot cocoa. I'll make a cinnamon churro coffee as my warm beverage.
Excellent entry into the contest.
John
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2023
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I'm all in with this with the exception of hot cocoa. I'll make a cinnamon churro coffee as my warm beverage.
Excellent entry into the contest.
John
Comment Written 31-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2023
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Thanks for the encouraging words, John.
I am not a coffee drinker. Though cinnamon in the cocoa or in a cup of tea would suit me fine.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
Comment from Teri7
This is a very nice and well written 5-7-5 poem you have penned for the Humanity Winter Haiku event. You used very good descriptive words with very lovely imagery that went well with your words. Best wishes in the contest. love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2023
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This is a very nice and well written 5-7-5 poem you have penned for the Humanity Winter Haiku event. You used very good descriptive words with very lovely imagery that went well with your words. Best wishes in the contest. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 30-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2023
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Thanks for the thorough, yet concise, review, Teri.
Joan
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
On those cold blustery evenings a cup of cocoa by the fire, and a book will soon have us sent to sleep, a few words of comfort here, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2023
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On those cold blustery evenings a cup of cocoa by the fire, and a book will soon have us sent to sleep, a few words of comfort here, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 29-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2023
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Thanks for reading and reviewing, Dolly. Both are much appreciated.
Joan
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
This is a good haiku club entry. The text could be one size larger with a visual that size. It would also be more prominent centered on the visual. The message is clearly stated and relatable. The visual fits perfectly. Good luck with your club entry.
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2023
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This is a good haiku club entry. The text could be one size larger with a visual that size. It would also be more prominent centered on the visual. The message is clearly stated and relatable. The visual fits perfectly. Good luck with your club entry.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2023
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Hi Sandra,
Thanks for the nice review and generous rating.
Joan
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You are welcome.
Comment from PoemsOfDD
A most enjoyable haiku. Great photo to enhance the limited words.
world's warmth realized... in front of a cozy warm fire.
I can relate to this having returned from Canada after it went to -26 degrees. Yes, very cold indeed!
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2023
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A most enjoyable haiku. Great photo to enhance the limited words.
world's warmth realized... in front of a cozy warm fire.
I can relate to this having returned from Canada after it went to -26 degrees. Yes, very cold indeed!
Comment Written 29-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2023
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Thanks, DD, for reading and commenting on my poem. I appreciate all the stars.
Joan
