Comment from Tom Horonzy

Excellent

The world is full of critics and it has captured me. I absolutely love lines one and two and that 's motto say three is bad but the first are so very, very good what three gives is a sub par performance. ð???

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 22-Jan-2023

Thanks for the comment and 5-star rating, Tom.
Joan

Comment from jessizero

Excellent

You have eight syllables on that second line. Did you mean to do that? I do like your poem. It makes me feel cozy just reading about it. Thanks for sharing, and best wishes to you.

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 Comment Written 22-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 22-Jan-2023

Thanks, Jessie. No, I didn't. I think I counted words instead of syllables on that line. I will remove 'hot', because it is not really needed.
Joan

Comment from royowen

Excellent

Oh yes, there's nothing nothing like a hot cup of cocoa, but I just realised I haven't had a cup of cocoa for an age, but good books, that's a different kettle of fish, well done Joan, blessings Roy

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 Comment Written 22-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 22-Jan-2023

Thanks for your nice review, Roy. I haven't had cocoa for a long time either.
Joan
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reply by royowen on 22-Jan-2023

Well done