haiku (Bird of Paradise)
haiku13 total reviews
Comment from pome lover
well, I think this rates a 6.
It has a lovely message which flows well; the picture makes the flowers look as though they are winged creatures, and then, you top it off with a surprise ending. bravo!
Best wishes in the contest.
Katharine
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2023
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well, I think this rates a 6.
It has a lovely message which flows well; the picture makes the flowers look as though they are winged creatures, and then, you top it off with a surprise ending. bravo!
Best wishes in the contest.
Katharine
Comment Written 23-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2023
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This "exceptional" means the world to me, as this one has been rattling around in my brain for some time. Also, I write in the more traditional haiku manner, which has changed quite a bit on this site. I love when good haiku is appreciated. You made my day.
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I'm so glad. I love the way you think! :)
Comment from Teri7
This is a very beautiful and well written haiku you have penned for the contest. You used very good descriptive words and beautiful imagery from the art work you chose. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2023
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This is a very beautiful and well written haiku you have penned for the contest. You used very good descriptive words and beautiful imagery from the art work you chose. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
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Comment Written 23-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2023
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Thank you for this lovely and well written review.
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You are so welcome!!!
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice artwork and presentation, Val.
-A well written haiku with effective
nature and seasonal imagery with
the flower and summer breeze.
-A very good satori line that creates
a good 'aha' moment.
-It's ironic that a flower is described like a bird!
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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2023
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-Nice artwork and presentation, Val.
-A well written haiku with effective
nature and seasonal imagery with
the flower and summer breeze.
-A very good satori line that creates
a good 'aha' moment.
-It's ironic that a flower is described like a bird!
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 23-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2023
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Thank you for your "right on" review. I have wondered the same thing about the name of this flower.
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You are very welcome. The first thing you think about is a bird!
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True in Southern California they are everywhere and stunning.
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Thanks for sharing.
