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The Ladybird & The Gnat

Eavesdropping on two tiny bugs

6 total reviews 
Comment from Sugarray77
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Hello Maria. I hope you are well. I loved your little verse/story and agree that with men, it is important to remind them who is Queen... LOL Great job on this one.

Melissa

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 29-Jan-2023
    Thanks so much for reading, Melissa.
Comment from patcelaw
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I would never say that in sex or not spot smart. Especially the bumblebee is very smart or the honeybee is very smart. They know from your gear exactly where they can find their nectar. Have a wonderful day and keep writing. Patricia.

 Comment Written 24-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 27-Jan-2023
    Thanks so much for your kind review. Have a lovely day. :)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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It is always best to put things right at the beginning of a relationship as once the tot has set in, it is hard to make changes. These are smart insects, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 24-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 27-Jan-2023
    Thanks so much for your kind review. Have a lovely day. xxx
Comment from lyenochka
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This is cute but the ladybird can be male despite the name and I wonder if the ladybird will then eat the gnat? Yes, insects are very smart and can do quite a lot of surprising things! Cute dialogue poem!

 Comment Written 24-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 27-Jan-2023
    Thanks for reading. Hugs.
Comment from royowen
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How very smart you are, when confronted with the possibility of losing you, he was transported into action, and made up some lost ground, a sort of ultimatum. "Shape up or ship out" well done Maria, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 24-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 27-Jan-2023
    Thanks so much for your kind review. Have a lovely day. :)
reply by royowen on 27-Jan-2023
    Welcome Maria
Comment from Bill Schott
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This poem, The Ladybird and the Gnat, teams up a ladybug and a gnat. This is like Lady and the Tramp, if Tramp is mangey and rabid. Ladybird beetles are observed, while gnats are hated on the level of fleas.

 Comment Written 24-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 24-Jan-2023
    I love ladybirds, I think they are really cute.
    Thanks for reading.