Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Well jealousy could tempt one to do some awful things. So I can see where the narrator could go with this as she must be feeling many things as she smells the one she loves with another. Best wishes in the contest!

Question:
I'm bounded by love (Did you really mean 'bounded' or 'bound'?)
https://grammarist.com/usage/bound-bounded/

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 Comment Written 24-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 25-Jan-2023

Thank you for catching that error, it's fixed now. It's always good to read your insightful and helpfull reviews. Love you.

Marival ❤️

Comment from karenina

Excellent

Oh...MAN! I hate betrayal! Perfect entry for the "Temptation Poetry Contest)-- Davidoff's "Cool Water" throws me into a morass of tears for reasons I'd rather not dwell on. Suffice to say "he" wore it...and probably only "it" ~ with another woman. I SO feel this!

Karenina


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 Comment Written 24-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 25-Jan-2023

It's so good to hear from you. How have you been?

Karenina,

hank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.

Gypsy hugs

reply by karenina on 25-Jan-2023

Hugs back!