Comment from harmony13

Excellent

The author's words made me smile! The poem is sweet, interesting,
descriptive and creative. I liked the first stanza because kindness is the
key to peace for me! The poem flow and connects well. The artwork is
adorable and compliments these words. Hope you are doing well!...Maria

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 29-Jan-2023

Thank you, Maria. I am good.

Comment from karenina

Excellent

Silly fun with a dash of marketing wisdom...

If the muse is feeling week toss in a kitten, a puppy, a baby or maybe an American flag...

All is forgiven if the "image" pulls at the heart strings!

Chuckling here....


This could be poem of the month!

I.mean...

Kitten!

Karenina

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 29-Jan-2023

That would bd funny.

reply by karenina on 29-Jan-2023

Now... If you had a poem about a baby, cuddling with a kitten and a puppy...waving an American flag...

No more calls please!

We'd have the winner!

(grin)

Comment from BethShelby

Excellent

I loved it. Your mind runs in strange directions, but you usually give me something to think about or make me smile. That last verse definately saves this one from the garbage bin. You can't go wrong with any poem that has a cute kitten in it.

 Comment Written 28-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 28-Jan-2023

Thank you, Beth. Cats seem to tip the scales.

Comment from Pearl Edwards

Excellent

Yes, your last two lines did get a chuckle from me, Bill. Mind you this little kitten looks to sweet to be mindless. A fun read with some creative rhyming. Enjoyed,
valda.

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 27-Jan-2023

Thank you, Valda.

Comment from John Ciarmello

Excellent

Awww! I love the picture of that sweet baby kitten! Your poem is far from mindless, even without the kitten, Bill. I loved everything about this piece. Best, JohnC

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 27-Jan-2023

Thank you so much, John.

Comment from Sugarray77

Excellent

I like it that you persevered with your nonsensical poem, because the thoughts and mental image of a kitten, does make everything seem better. Very humorous and I love your jocularity, Bill.

Melissa

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 27-Jan-2023

Thank you, Melissa. I?m a happy fellow.

Comment from Sally Law

Excellent

Ah, this is precious, Bill. I especially love the poem and ho-em end rhymes. The kitten wins the supporting actor role. Sending you my very best for your writing endeavors.
Sal XOs

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 27-Jan-2023

Thank you, Sal. Hope you're well.

Comment from Jim Wile

Excellent

The poem may be mindless, but so are cats. They never mind you when you tell them to do something (or stop doing something!)

You've written a humorous poem about a favorite subject of mine--cats and especially kittens. They can bring hours of joy, just like reading humorous poetry. Great job, Bill.

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 27-Jan-2023

Thanks, Jim

Comment from Spitfire

Excellent

I chuckled at the last two lines although I wonder why a kitten instead of a puppy. Maybe this is a not so gentle reminder that poems about a small furry critter are fun to read.

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 26-Jan-2023

Yes. The readers will forget the words and rate the kitten.

Comment from nomi338

Excellent

A lesson that I learned early in my membership. If you write anything about a cute animal, be it dog, cat, fish or some other type of animal. Your poem will be well received, perhaps even make All Time Best.

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 26-Jan-2023

Let?s see what this thing rates.