A Journey
It starts with hope3 total reviews
Comment from lyenochka
I great way to say it. And that first line gets it all started. First we speak or write our intentions, then we have to desire to go forward with our plan, then finally, we have to actually take actions to make it happen.
Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2023
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I great way to say it. And that first line gets it all started. First we speak or write our intentions, then we have to desire to go forward with our plan, then finally, we have to actually take actions to make it happen.
Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 28-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2023
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Yes you got it.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice image and presentation.
-The syllable count is good,
along with the examples and alliteration.
-I like how you make it a three step process
with a message; the path, and the results.
-You also have the means for arriving at each of those.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2023
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-Nice image and presentation.
-The syllable count is good,
along with the examples and alliteration.
-I like how you make it a three step process
with a message; the path, and the results.
-You also have the means for arriving at each of those.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 27-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2023
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Thank you. That was the goal.
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You are welcome.
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
This is a good entry into the 5-7-5 hope contest. The text is an okay size but could be a size or two large with the large visual. I like the text centered and bold. That does make it more prominent. I would drop the first line down one space to make the text more evenly placed in the poem box. The visual is okay, but one with the sun and no gray clouds would be better. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2023
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This is a good entry into the 5-7-5 hope contest. The text is an okay size but could be a size or two large with the large visual. I like the text centered and bold. That does make it more prominent. I would drop the first line down one space to make the text more evenly placed in the poem box. The visual is okay, but one with the sun and no gray clouds would be better. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 27-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2023
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Thank you
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You are welcome.
