Cascading Fun
Cascade poem Potlatch post5 total reviews
Comment from Pearl Edwards
With rhyme I'm a friend, with meter not much - I have learnt to make a friend of rhyme, but me and meter, are still learning. I ;like the description of bold, brave and daring for us Potlatch Clubbers.
Typo -This site skipped and jumped my (me) to this club
Enjoyed it Joan.
cheers,
valda
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2023
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With rhyme I'm a friend, with meter not much - I have learnt to make a friend of rhyme, but me and meter, are still learning. I ;like the description of bold, brave and daring for us Potlatch Clubbers.
Typo -This site skipped and jumped my (me) to this club
Enjoyed it Joan.
cheers,
valda
Comment Written 27-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2023
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Thanks, Valda, for the nice review and editing. I will make the change.
Joan
Comment from Sugarray77
Hello there Joan. I really liked your cascading poem and was duly informed about this type of verse in your well chosen words. It was fun to read your version of the Cascade. Thanks for the info.
Melissa
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2023
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Hello there Joan. I really liked your cascading poem and was duly informed about this type of verse in your well chosen words. It was fun to read your version of the Cascade. Thanks for the info.
Melissa
Comment Written 27-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2023
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Thanks, Melissa, for the review and high raitng. Both are much appreciated.
Joan
Comment from lyenochka
I like your humorous Cascade poem about how to write a Cascade poem! Great job. I hope Jan will use your example for when she has the Cascade poem challenge again!
This site skipped and jumped my to this club (me instead of my?)
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2023
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I like your humorous Cascade poem about how to write a Cascade poem! Great job. I hope Jan will use your example for when she has the Cascade poem challenge again!
This site skipped and jumped my to this club (me instead of my?)
Comment Written 27-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2023
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Thanks for the encouraging words. I am honored that you think my pome can be an example for the club.
Joan
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Did you get it, cascading, right? I wouldn't know. JP has a way in challenges that I rarely understand completely, so I skip on by. AS for this piece I see how it goes but why was your second word in line one to and not for?
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2023
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Did you get it, cascading, right? I wouldn't know. JP has a way in challenges that I rarely understand completely, so I skip on by. AS for this piece I see how it goes but why was your second word in line one to and not for?
Comment Written 27-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2023
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Thank Tom. I'll check the possible error.
Joan
Comment from royowen
I like the cascade poem, because the repetitive lines keep one on the straight and narrow, when concerned by the consistency of theme, which makes the form very desirable, beautifully written Joan, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2023
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I like the cascade poem, because the repetitive lines keep one on the straight and narrow, when concerned by the consistency of theme, which makes the form very desirable, beautifully written Joan, blessings Roy
Comment Written 27-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2023
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Thanks for the kind comments and high rating, Roy. Glad you liked it.
Joan
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Most welcome
