Maternità
One of my future hopes.56 total reviews
Comment from kiwisteveh
Well I hope this is true and if so congratulations and best wishes.
I like the enforced pauses in line 2 which add emphasis to the concluding surge in line 3
Good luck in the contest.
Steve
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2023
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Well I hope this is true and if so congratulations and best wishes.
I like the enforced pauses in line 2 which add emphasis to the concluding surge in line 3
Good luck in the contest.
Steve
Comment Written 30-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2023
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Thank you for reading and reviewing, Steve. I appreciate it and your feedback. I'm thrilled you enjoyed it. No, it's not actually happening. Just a hopeful wish. Thank you again for reading. Take care. :D :D
Comment from Teri7
This is a very nice and sweet 5-7-5 hope poem for the writing prompt. You gave very good comments and very good descriptive words and great imagery from the art work you chose. Thank you for sharing and best wishes in the contest. Teri
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2023
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This is a very nice and sweet 5-7-5 hope poem for the writing prompt. You gave very good comments and very good descriptive words and great imagery from the art work you chose. Thank you for sharing and best wishes in the contest. Teri
Comment Written 30-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2023
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Thank you for reading and reviewing, Teri. I appreciate it and your feedback. I'm thrilled you enjoyed it. Thank you again for reading. Take care. :D :D
Comment from newilk
I love poetry about motherhood! Though I love looking into motherhood in all kinds of media! This was so well written! You used so few words to capture so much and you did so splendidly!
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2023
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I love poetry about motherhood! Though I love looking into motherhood in all kinds of media! This was so well written! You used so few words to capture so much and you did so splendidly!
Comment Written 30-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2023
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Thank you for reading and reviewing, Teri. I appreciate it and your feedback. I'm thrilled you enjoyed it. Thank you again for reading. Take care. :D :D
Comment from tfawcus
This is a succinct description of the maternal instinct that drives the continuation of our species. New life in which our future hopes lie. I can see why teaching might strengthen your desire, though I can remember from my own teaching days a few children who might act as a warning! LOL
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2023
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This is a succinct description of the maternal instinct that drives the continuation of our species. New life in which our future hopes lie. I can see why teaching might strengthen your desire, though I can remember from my own teaching days a few children who might act as a warning! LOL
Comment Written 30-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2023
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Thank you for reading and reviewing, Teri. I appreciate it and your feedback. I'm thrilled you enjoyed it. Lol. Yes, I know which students you mean. Those are my special students who need extra love. Thank you again for reading. Take care. :D :D
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Wonderful entry for the 5-7-5 Hope writing prompt.
Good syllables count but the connection between lines can be improved.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2023
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Wonderful entry for the 5-7-5 Hope writing prompt.
Good syllables count but the connection between lines can be improved.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus
Comment Written 30-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2023
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Thank you for reading and reviewing, Gypsy. I appreciate it and your feedback. I'm thrilled you enjoyed it. Thank you again for reading. Take care. :D :D
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
hoping for a forthcoming birth is a wonderful thing, especially when it is shared by the whole family. This is a refreshing poem compared to the emphasis on religious aspects that is often seen (don't get me wrong, I'm not non religious, I just like variety) kay
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2023
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hoping for a forthcoming birth is a wonderful thing, especially when it is shared by the whole family. This is a refreshing poem compared to the emphasis on religious aspects that is often seen (don't get me wrong, I'm not non religious, I just like variety) kay
Comment Written 30-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2023
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Thank you for reading and reviewing, Kay. I appreciate it and your feedback. I'm thrilled you enjoyed it. Thank you again for reading. Take care. :D :D
Comment from Charles W. Johnson
Certainly a perfect topic for a hope themed contest. My daughter grew up thinking motherhood was not a possibility for her (due to her cystic fibrosis) but she held on to hope and a miracle occurred. There is a poem in my portfolio called "Something Grander" that touches on this topic. Best of luck in the contest, I enjoyed your entry.
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2023
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Certainly a perfect topic for a hope themed contest. My daughter grew up thinking motherhood was not a possibility for her (due to her cystic fibrosis) but she held on to hope and a miracle occurred. There is a poem in my portfolio called "Something Grander" that touches on this topic. Best of luck in the contest, I enjoyed your entry.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2023
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Thank you for reading and reviewing. I appreciate it and your feedback. I'm thrilled you enjoyed it. Oh, I will have to check that one out. I'm glad it worked out for her. Thank you again for reading. Take care. :D :D
Comment from jmdg1954
It grows inside me.
Stirring.
Longing.Motherhood.
It is on its way.
Nice quick poem on motherhood. I'm sure your dream/wish will come to fruition.
Blessing, John
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2023
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It grows inside me.
Stirring.
Longing.Motherhood.
It is on its way.
Nice quick poem on motherhood. I'm sure your dream/wish will come to fruition.
Blessing, John
Comment Written 29-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2023
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Thank you for reading and reviewing, John. I appreciate it and your feedback. I'm thrilled you enjoyed it. Oh, I hope it will, too. Thank you again for reading. Take care. :D :D
Comment from susand3022
Love this!
Hello Author, speaking as one who yearned for years, and years, I'll tell you... it won't matter how, but go ahead and do it! It's worth every minute, every "ache and pain" of theirs that you go through.
My son just graduated from college and says he doesn't want to have children. I said, I don't care if you don't want any of your own... there are plenty of kids out there who need homes. Just bring me someone I can wrap my arms around, spoil, and will call me Grandma. That's all I want.
Susan :)
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2023
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Love this!
Hello Author, speaking as one who yearned for years, and years, I'll tell you... it won't matter how, but go ahead and do it! It's worth every minute, every "ache and pain" of theirs that you go through.
My son just graduated from college and says he doesn't want to have children. I said, I don't care if you don't want any of your own... there are plenty of kids out there who need homes. Just bring me someone I can wrap my arms around, spoil, and will call me Grandma. That's all I want.
Susan :)
Comment Written 29-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2023
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Thank you for reading and reviewing, Susan. I appreciate it and your feedback. I'm thrilled you enjoyed it. I do have plans to look into adoption in the coming years. I just need to establish myself more. Thank you again for reading. Take care. :D :D
Comment from Shirley Rebstock
Definitely met 5 7 5 rules. Poem does say a lot in a few words.
Well done. Yep exciting to await the baby in your tummy or a baby up for adoption. Hope your wishes come true and thanks for your work as a teacher, not easy.
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2023
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Definitely met 5 7 5 rules. Poem does say a lot in a few words.
Well done. Yep exciting to await the baby in your tummy or a baby up for adoption. Hope your wishes come true and thanks for your work as a teacher, not easy.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2023
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Thank you for reading and reviewing, John. I appreciate it and your feedback. I'm thrilled you enjoyed it. Oh, I hope it will, too. Thank you again for reading. Take care. :D :D
