Comment from RodG

Excellent

This photo/poem combo really captures the serene mood of dawn on a lake.
Excellent personification of dawn whispering with a "soft voice." And we can visualize those "ripples o'er the lake."
Rod

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2023

---

reply by the author on 29-Jan-2023

Thank you Rod!!

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

A tranquil scene described here and I enjoyed the magic in your words as those whispers had a soft message of calm and peace here, much enjoyed, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2023

---

reply by the author on 29-Jan-2023

Thanks so much Dolly!!

Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig

Excellent

This is a good entry to 3-5-3 contest. The text is a great size. You knew it was going under a large visual, so you increased the size. Smart move! Centering it also makes it more prominent. The message is clearly stated. I love the personification you use for the lake. I would drop the first line down one space and go to the end of your last line and hit enter once. This will expand your poem box a bit. The visual fits perfectly. This is a well-done entry. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 28-Jan-2023

---

reply by the author on 28-Jan-2023

Thanks so much, Sandra!

reply by Sandra Nelms-Ludwig on 28-Jan-2023

You are welcome.

Comment from Karyn2

Excellent

What a glorious picture!! That is stunning and your words are such a lovely addition to it. The stillness of the morning sunrise, ripples in the water - it feels like the whispers of a new day. Wonderful!

 Comment Written 28-Jan-2023

---

reply by the author on 28-Jan-2023

Thanks so much!

Comment from mermaids

Excellent

I like the feel and flow of your words, I can feel morning arising in a clear scene. Your vivid descriptive words capture the dawn beginning a new day and it is as if the dawn is a live character. Excellent 3-5-3 poem that creates a clear picture.

 Comment Written 28-Jan-2023

---

reply by the author on 28-Jan-2023

Thanks so much!