Finding My Way
3-5-3 contest entry2 total reviews
Comment from jessizero
This was such a sweet, sad poem. It made me want to weep as the mother did. Thank you so much for sharing this lovely poem here, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2023
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This was such a sweet, sad poem. It made me want to weep as the mother did. Thank you so much for sharing this lovely poem here, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 28-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2023
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Thank you for the kind review and good luck wishes, Jessi. I'm glad you liked this little piece.
Comment from mermaids
Your words touch the heart and are true to life. I like your last line "to chase dreams". It shows that all grow up and should chase their dreams. Excellent 3-5-3 poem that says much and brings forth feelings and emotions.
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2023
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Your words touch the heart and are true to life. I like your last line "to chase dreams". It shows that all grow up and should chase their dreams. Excellent 3-5-3 poem that says much and brings forth feelings and emotions.
Comment Written 28-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2023
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Thank you for the kind review and generous stars, Mermaids. I'm glad you liked this little piece.
