Storm Clouds Loom
A city haiku for the club11 total reviews
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
hello, June,
somehow your city haiku didn't go through the contest but that is okay
I love the presentation and imagery
usually, Cancun has very good weather but the weather has been unpredictable
well done, my friend
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2023
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hello, June,
somehow your city haiku didn't go through the contest but that is okay
I love the presentation and imagery
usually, Cancun has very good weather but the weather has been unpredictable
well done, my friend
Comment Written 30-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2023
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Thank you! Not sure why my poems aren?t going through the club - but I?m glad you enjoyed this one.
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Have you tried this to post through the club?
go to SOCIAL on the top toolbar
chose CLUB then go to Haiku club or Japanese club and in the bottom below the club event click on RESERVE A SPOT, then go back and SUBMIT YOUR ENTRY
if that doesn't work you could ask Tom, but it's not a big deal
Gypsy hugs
Comment from harmony13
The first two lines of this poem flow and connect well. The last line
put the poem all together. I liked how the author used the word roil -
the meaning was interesting. The artwork is awesome and compliments
this poem well.
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2023
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The first two lines of this poem flow and connect well. The last line
put the poem all together. I liked how the author used the word roil -
the meaning was interesting. The artwork is awesome and compliments
this poem well.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2023
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Thank you! I?m glad you enjoyed this stormy haiku!
Comment from kahpot
How beautifully written and presented, it reminds me of where I live as all the tourists disappear when the wet season comes, an excellent entry for the club challenge****kahpot
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2023
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How beautifully written and presented, it reminds me of where I live as all the tourists disappear when the wet season comes, an excellent entry for the club challenge****kahpot
Comment Written 29-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2023
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I?m glad you enjoyed this haiku about storm clouds looming. Can?t argue with Mother Nature - when it wants to rain, best take cover til it?s over. Thanks for sharing your feedback.
Comment from patcelaw
Hey, very nice 575 poem. Do you have presented it beautifully on the message of the poem is very clear. I enjoyed seeing it and reading it. God bless Patricia.
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2023
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Hey, very nice 575 poem. Do you have presented it beautifully on the message of the poem is very clear. I enjoyed seeing it and reading it. God bless Patricia.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2023
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I?m glad you enjoyed this haiku about storm clouds looming. Can?t argue with Mother Nature - when it wants to rain, best take cover til it?s over. Thanks for sharing your feedback.
Comment from BethShelby
The picture reminds we of one I took in Cancun just as a hurricane was about the strike there. The water enptied of swmmers quickly as the storm clouds rolled in.
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2023
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The picture reminds we of one I took in Cancun just as a hurricane was about the strike there. The water enptied of swmmers quickly as the storm clouds rolled in.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2023
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I?m glad you enjoyed this haiku about storm clouds looming. Can?t argue with Mother Nature - when it wants to rain, best take cover til it?s over. Thanks for sharing your feedback.
Comment from Sugarray77
A very seasonal offering in this gem, June. Your artwork sets this up perfectly and you deliver the form flawlessly. Great job.
Melissa
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2023
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A very seasonal offering in this gem, June. Your artwork sets this up perfectly and you deliver the form flawlessly. Great job.
Melissa
Comment Written 29-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2023
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I?m glad you enjoyed this haiku about storm clouds looming. Can?t argue with Mother Nature - when it wants to rain, best take cover til it?s over. Thanks for sharing your feedback.
Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-5, Storm Clouds Loom, has the proper formatting and depicts a season of diminishing enjoyment as the weather and nature combine to chase people back home.
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2023
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This 5-7-5, Storm Clouds Loom, has the proper formatting and depicts a season of diminishing enjoyment as the weather and nature combine to chase people back home.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2023
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I?m glad you enjoyed this haiku about storm clouds looming. Can?t argue with Mother Nature - when it wants to rain, best take cover til it?s over. Thanks for sharing your feedback.
Comment from royowen
Oh yes indeed, the storm clouds come in season, in our city at least, so this is a very good work, an excellent entry Kim this contest, I expect you'll do well in this contest, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2023
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Oh yes indeed, the storm clouds come in season, in our city at least, so this is a very good work, an excellent entry Kim this contest, I expect you'll do well in this contest, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 29-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2023
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I?m glad you enjoyed this haiku about storm clouds looming. Can?t argue with Mother Nature - when it wants to rain, best take cover til it?s over. Thanks for sharing your feedback.
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Well done
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
We experienced an evening like this last night as the cloud was black over the see and we saw it coming towards us and everybody took their washing in and rolled down the blinds, an atmospheric write June, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2023
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We experienced an evening like this last night as the cloud was black over the see and we saw it coming towards us and everybody took their washing in and rolled down the blinds, an atmospheric write June, love Dolly x
Comment Written 29-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2023
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I?m glad you enjoyed this haiku about storm clouds looming. Can?t argue with Mother Nature - when it wants to rain, best take cover til it?s over. Thanks for sharing your feedback.
Comment from Karyn2
I just love the word "roil"! Such a great word choice and contrasts the "looms above". Right now, we are about an hour off being hit by 3 storm fronts on the East coast of Aus so I'm literally feeling the rumble in your poem after this hot summer day!! Love your Haiku.
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reply by the author on 29-Jan-2023
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I just love the word "roil"! Such a great word choice and contrasts the "looms above". Right now, we are about an hour off being hit by 3 storm fronts on the East coast of Aus so I'm literally feeling the rumble in your poem after this hot summer day!! Love your Haiku.
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Comment Written 29-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2023
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I?m glad you enjoyed this haiku about storm clouds looming. Can?t argue with Mother Nature - when it wants to rain, best take cover til it?s over. Thanks for sharing your feedback.
