Storm Clouds Loom
A city haiku for the club11 total reviews
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
This is a beautifully worded haiku. The text is a good size. I like that you used a colored font and centered it on the visual. Both make your text more prominent. I would drop the first line down one more space to center the text in the poem box. The visual fits perfectly. Thank you for sharing.
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reply by the author on 29-Jan-2023
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This is a beautifully worded haiku. The text is a good size. I like that you used a colored font and centered it on the visual. Both make your text more prominent. I would drop the first line down one more space to center the text in the poem box. The visual fits perfectly. Thank you for sharing.
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Comment Written 28-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2023
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I?m glad you enjoyed this haiku on looming storm clouds. We can?t control the weather, but we can get out of the rain. I appreciate your sharing your feedback.
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You are welcome.
