Music Heals
A naani for the Japanese Club13 total reviews
Comment from Pearl Edwards
Very true, June. It is time to crank up the volume on the music for the world certainly could do with some soothing. Well thought out June and well written in the Naani form. Cheers
Valda
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2023
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Very true, June. It is time to crank up the volume on the music for the world certainly could do with some soothing. Well thought out June and well written in the Naani form. Cheers
Valda
Comment Written 30-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2023
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We do need more music in our lives - it can tame the beast in us during these turbulent times. Thank you for sharing your thoughts.
Comment from Debbie Pope
I like everything about this naani, June. I keep thinking of how you tied the image to your words through your use of "fractured." And I like the play on words (no pun intended) with your last line. Plus, there is truth in your whole premise. Music can heal, and people don't take the time to let it do its magic.
Well done.
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2023
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I like everything about this naani, June. I keep thinking of how you tied the image to your words through your use of "fractured." And I like the play on words (no pun intended) with your last line. Plus, there is truth in your whole premise. Music can heal, and people don't take the time to let it do its magic.
Well done.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2023
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We do need more music in our lives - it can tame the beast in us during these turbulent times. Thank you for sharing your thoughts.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice artwork and presentation, June.
-You wrote a good poem with a good topic.
-Effective imagery describes the power of music,
as well as "fractured society."
-The message is an important one; music
can heal, and society and the world need healing.
-Well done.
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2023
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-Nice artwork and presentation, June.
-You wrote a good poem with a good topic.
-Effective imagery describes the power of music,
as well as "fractured society."
-The message is an important one; music
can heal, and society and the world need healing.
-Well done.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2023
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Yes, we can all use a little healing and soothing these days - and music can tame the wildest beast. Thank you for dropping by to share your insights. Your feedback is much appreciated.
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You are very welcome, June. Music has been a big part of my life.
Comment from Jasmine Girl
I so agree with you. We need to play despite of current situation. Today we went to shop at Costco. They don't have any eggs. There is an egg shortage. I wonder what's next. Let's play and forgot about the pain.
Well done.
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2023
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I so agree with you. We need to play despite of current situation. Today we went to shop at Costco. They don't have any eggs. There is an egg shortage. I wonder what's next. Let's play and forgot about the pain.
Well done.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2023
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Yes, we can all use a little healing and soothing these days - and music can tame the wildest beast. Thank you for dropping by to share your insights. Your feedback is much appreciated.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Good syllable count and connection between lines. I love the presentation. The Naani form is well done.
Music has the power 6
to heal body, mind and spirit 8
Fractured society needs 7
time to play 3
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2023
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Good syllable count and connection between lines. I love the presentation. The Naani form is well done.
Music has the power 6
to heal body, mind and spirit 8
Fractured society needs 7
time to play 3
Comment Written 29-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2023
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Yes, we can all use a little healing and soothing these days - and music can tame the wildest beast. Thank you for dropping by to share your insights. Your feedback is much appreciated.
Comment from Sugarray77
This is a verse that has depths and crevices of meaning, June. I have always loved the Naani form so that the poem, in a succinct manner, can say something worth saying... as you did here. So well done, my friend.
Melissa
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This is a verse that has depths and crevices of meaning, June. I have always loved the Naani form so that the poem, in a succinct manner, can say something worth saying... as you did here. So well done, my friend.
Melissa
Comment Written 29-Jan-2023
Comment from Bill Schott
This naani, Music Heals, has the proper formatting and reminds the readers that music reaches where words and actions cannot seem to penetrate. ..................................
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2023
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This naani, Music Heals, has the proper formatting and reminds the readers that music reaches where words and actions cannot seem to penetrate. ..................................
Comment Written 29-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2023
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Yes, we can all use a little healing and soothing these days - and music can tame the wildest beast. Thank you for dropping by to share your insights. Your feedback is much appreciated.
Comment from patcelaw
June, I very much enjoyed this Japanese poem. Your presentation was wonderful and it was an easy read even for eyes that are dim like mine are, since am losing my eyesight. Patricia
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2023
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June, I very much enjoyed this Japanese poem. Your presentation was wonderful and it was an easy read even for eyes that are dim like mine are, since am losing my eyesight. Patricia
Comment Written 29-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2023
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Yes, we can all use a little healing and soothing these days - and music can tame the wildest beast. Thank you for dropping by to share your insights. Your feedback is much appreciated.
Comment from Mrs. KT
Good morning, June!
I so agree!
Music does, indeed, nurture and heal the flagging spirit.
Wouldn't it be something if our lives were accompanied by music... like in the movies? What a thought!
Your form is "spot on!"
Thank you for sharing!
diane
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2023
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Good morning, June!
I so agree!
Music does, indeed, nurture and heal the flagging spirit.
Wouldn't it be something if our lives were accompanied by music... like in the movies? What a thought!
Your form is "spot on!"
Thank you for sharing!
diane
Comment Written 29-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2023
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Yes, we can all use a little healing and soothing these days - and music can tame the wildest beast. Thank you for dropping by to share your insights. Your feedback is much appreciated.
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Always a pleasure to read your work, June!
diane
Comment from RodG
I would agree with your message which is clearly conveyed in this Naani and your well-chosen title. That artwork is a perfect choice to illustrate this poem. Now if this "fractured society" would only listen to you. Rod
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2023
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I would agree with your message which is clearly conveyed in this Naani and your well-chosen title. That artwork is a perfect choice to illustrate this poem. Now if this "fractured society" would only listen to you. Rod
Comment Written 29-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2023
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Yes, we can all use a little healing and soothing these days - and music can tame the wildest beast. Thank you for dropping by to share your insights. Your feedback is much appreciated.
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You are welcome.
