Filled with Questions
Contest Entry2 total reviews
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
This is a good entry into the 4-8-4 contest. The text is a good size. The message is clearly stated and easily understood. It's relatable because we have all experienced a situation where these questions are pondered. The visual fits perfectly. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2023
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This is a good entry into the 4-8-4 contest. The text is a good size. The message is clearly stated and easily understood. It's relatable because we have all experienced a situation where these questions are pondered. The visual fits perfectly. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2023
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Thank you for your excellent review!
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You are welcome.
Comment from Brett Matthew West
This contest specifically calls for 4-8-4 format.
Upon looking at the second line of this poem it clearly contains only 5 syllables:
What - to - do - with - you
Therefore, it does not meet the requirements of this contest and you may wish to address this issue in order to bring it to the requirement before the contest commences.
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2023
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This contest specifically calls for 4-8-4 format.
Upon looking at the second line of this poem it clearly contains only 5 syllables:
What - to - do - with - you
Therefore, it does not meet the requirements of this contest and you may wish to address this issue in order to bring it to the requirement before the contest commences.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2023
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Thank you for your help and advice! Is it better for a five stars rating? Can you please take another look?
