Comment from kahpot

Excellent

Yes so many different things please so many different people, what a wonderful display of cookies, very well presented and best wishes for your contest****kahpot

 Comment Written 02-Feb-2023

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reply by the author on 02-Feb-2023

Thank you for your kind review!

Comment from newilk

Excellent

this is such a lovely little story,, it reminds me of something I would've read when I was small. It definitely brought a smile to my face. Wonderful work as always!

 Comment Written 30-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 30-Jan-2023

Thank you so much!

Comment from Mary Vigasin

Excellent

A fun story with good dialogue. Very well presented in words and pictures. A very tempting story.
I would have hit the oatmeal raisin!
Good luck in the contest.
Best wishes,
Mary

 Comment Written 30-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 30-Jan-2023

Thank you for your kind review!

Comment from CrystieCookie999

Excellent

This short fiction piece reminded me of a Christmas cookie swap. And that was years ago! It sounds like Bessie wanted to plan a fun party for friends. Cookies will definitely make for a fun time. Only two little punctuation or spelling fixes:
", Hooray, for Bessie's cookie party!"
You can say:
"Hooray for Bessie's cookie party!"
Also with this sentence: Her guest came and sat at the dinner table.
I think you meant to say guests with an s on the end.

 Comment Written 30-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 30-Jan-2023

Thank you so much! I fixed the mistakes.

Comment from nomi338

Excellent

Sounds like a party I might have enjoyed being invited to. Not every party needs to be just plain old everyday food. I see nothing wrong with a party that features dessert food only. It is a party right?

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 29-Jan-2023

Thank you for your excellent review! You can say it's a party in the fiction world. Yes, definitely!!! kidding, my friend!

Comment from Mike Stevens

Excellent

Another fine tale, Raul, and quite a tasty one----ah, ha, ha, did you see what I did there? Woo, yeah, baby! Junk food junkies, the lot of them. Not a carrot stick to be found!

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 29-Jan-2023

Thank you for your excellent review!

Comment from judiverse

Excellent

That array of cookies looks good. I've made cookies with the chocolate kiss center. I suppose Bessie had told her guests beforehand it was a cookie party. So Carol shouldn't have been surprised. First paragraph, Bessie created. Omit "had." Use "to come" at the end of the sentence instead of "to attend her home." The kinds of cookies you mention sound delicious. Try to have something unexpected happen at the end of the story. Good luck in the contest. judi

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 29-Jan-2023

Thank you very much!

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

Those cookies look really good since we have not had dinner yet! You used very good dialogue and very good descriptive words. Just fix this one small thing please: bessie," Sandra said.
(Bessie)

Best wishes in the contest. Teri

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 29-Jan-2023

Thank you very much!

reply by the author on 29-Jan-2023

I have fixed the mistake. Thank you for your help!

reply by Teri7 on 29-Jan-2023

You are so welcome. It was very small. Blessings, Teri

Comment from LJbutterfly

Excellent

Looking at that beautiful table, I wish I had been invited. A cookie party is a creative idea to write about, and a great idea for Bessie to organize. Best wishes in the Flash Fiction contest.

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 29-Jan-2023

Thank you so very much!

Comment from BermyBye50

Excellent

Raul,

This is a delightful entry for the Flash Fiction contest. I love to bake and thoroughly enjoyed reading this short write. Well done.

All the best in the contest,

Eugene

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 29-Jan-2023

Thank you for your excellent review, my friend!