Count Spatula
a 4-8-48 total reviews
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
This is really clever. Extremely horrible and gruesome, but unbelievably clever nevertheless. I enjoyed it very much, and wish you good luck in the contest (and no, there's no way I am ever coming to visit your kitchen. kay
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2023
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This is really clever. Extremely horrible and gruesome, but unbelievably clever nevertheless. I enjoyed it very much, and wish you good luck in the contest (and no, there's no way I am ever coming to visit your kitchen. kay
Comment Written 31-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2023
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Thank you, Kay. I have a regular spatula. : )
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
This is a "punny" stated entry into the 4-8-4 poetry contest. The text is a great size. The message is clearly stated and easily understood if one likes and gets puns. The visual fits well. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2023
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This is a "punny" stated entry into the 4-8-4 poetry contest. The text is a great size. The message is clearly stated and easily understood if one likes and gets puns. The visual fits well. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 31-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2023
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Thanks, Sandra
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You are welcome.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Wonderful entry for the 4-8-4 writing prompt contest.
Good syllables count and connection between lines.
It's pretty funny... (*=*)
I love the imagery and presentation.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2023
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Wonderful entry for the 4-8-4 writing prompt contest.
Good syllables count and connection between lines.
It's pretty funny... (*=*)
I love the imagery and presentation.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus
Comment Written 31-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2023
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Thanks, Gypsy
Comment from TDLRasmar
It is a very cute poem. The red spoon is a nice touch. Would have liked to see it dripping blood and maybe covered in a black cape. I liked the Take-a-life Knife, but would have changed it to Get-a-life knife.
Good luck on the contest.
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2023
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It is a very cute poem. The red spoon is a nice touch. Would have liked to see it dripping blood and maybe covered in a black cape. I liked the Take-a-life Knife, but would have changed it to Get-a-life knife.
Good luck on the contest.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2023
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Really? Get a life? Hmmm?
Comment from royowen
What an interesting take on this implement, the thought of a common kitchen utensil as being an aid to murder is quite definitely, both innovative and original well done, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2023
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What an interesting take on this implement, the thought of a common kitchen utensil as being an aid to murder is quite definitely, both innovative and original well done, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 29-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2023
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Thank you, Roy
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Most welcome
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Most welcome
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
I'm not sure what you are saying in this poem, but could it mean knife symbolism implies that you can become a great person by taking control of your steps and making the right decisions now.
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2023
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I'm not sure what you are saying in this poem, but could it mean knife symbolism implies that you can become a great person by taking control of your steps and making the right decisions now.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2023
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Obviously, Rosemary. : )
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It is easy to think the dark side in this poem.
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is a spatula a kitchen tool? or you speaking about something else?
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a chilling write and when I saw the picture I had an idea that this would be a murderous horror write, a bloody scene indeed, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2023
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This is a chilling write and when I saw the picture I had an idea that this would be a murderous horror write, a bloody scene indeed, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 29-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2023
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Thank you, Dolly
Comment from w.j.debi
Excellent word play which creates an interesting visual. I was drawn in by the creative title--again a great play on words--which made me wonder what could be attached to it.
Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2023
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Excellent word play which creates an interesting visual. I was drawn in by the creative title--again a great play on words--which made me wonder what could be attached to it.
Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2023
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Thank you, WoJo. (I gave you a nickname. Is that alright?)
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You are welcome.
I've been off the site for two years, but my friends here call me Debi
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Sorry, Debi.
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Not a problem. WoJo would be fine if that's what you prefer.
