Comment from Jasmine Girl

Excellent

This sounds like a bus stop chatting and bantering. People who can take buses don't mind waiting. It's fun to meet people on the bus or at the bus stops.

Well done and good luck.

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 29-Jan-2023

Thank you, Lisa

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

This is like Waiting for Godot meets the Twilight Zone or something. Enjoyed the humor and the interesting conversation and misinterpretation of each of the overhearing of conversations! Best wishes in the contest!

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 Comment Written 29-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 29-Jan-2023

I am going to complete and post something without error someday.

reply by lyenochka on 29-Jan-2023

You're doing it on purpose to make sure I feel useful. 😊

Comment from Douglas Goff

Excellent

Very good, Bill. I didn't see that ending coming at all!

Quick fix:

STAN (MAN STANDING)
I wouild like to weigh in on that discussion if I might.
(would)

Great script. Very enjoyable.

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 Comment Written 29-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 29-Jan-2023

Thank you, Douglas. I fixed the spelling.

reply by Douglas Goff on 29-Jan-2023

I love helping out the greats, my friend!