Just magical
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Comment from Charlie Shine
Nice, simple and effective.
I really enjoyed this.
Such a true statement.
Well done.
Charlie.
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2023
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Nice, simple and effective.
I really enjoyed this.
Such a true statement.
Well done.
Charlie.
Comment Written 20-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2023
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Thank you so much Charlie. I greatly appreciate the words and wonderful review with six stars. Much appreciated.
Wendy
Comment from zanya
A very interesting and effective juxtaposition here reminding us of the sheer power and magic of words and what they can achieve and express -well done
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2023
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A very interesting and effective juxtaposition here reminding us of the sheer power and magic of words and what they can achieve and express -well done
Comment Written 04-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2023
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Thank you very much Zanya. I very much appreciate your review.
Wendy
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
I tink this is THE best poem I have ever read about the process of writing. You have managed to distill the essence into a mere sixteen syllables, and present it beautifully. Well done. kay
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2023
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I tink this is THE best poem I have ever read about the process of writing. You have managed to distill the essence into a mere sixteen syllables, and present it beautifully. Well done. kay
Comment Written 31-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2023
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Thank you very much Kay. I love your review, and find it extremely encouraging!
Wendy
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Magicians are very clever as to their tricks. Many of them seem so unbelievable to watch; I am sure several have gone to some kind of acting school, don't you think? I watch a ventriloquist last evening. Like your poem.
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2023
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Magicians are very clever as to their tricks. Many of them seem so unbelievable to watch; I am sure several have gone to some kind of acting school, don't you think? I watch a ventriloquist last evening. Like your poem.
Comment Written 31-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2023
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Thank you Rosemary. Yes, like a magician somehow magically produces a live rabbit, we want our words to magically spring to life for others. Glad you liked it!
Wendy
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
This is a well-stated entry into the 4-8-4 poetry contest. The text is a great size. The message is clearly presented and easily understood. The presentation with the dark blue text on baby blue background looks great. The visual fits perfectly. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2023
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This is a well-stated entry into the 4-8-4 poetry contest. The text is a great size. The message is clearly presented and easily understood. The presentation with the dark blue text on baby blue background looks great. The visual fits perfectly. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 31-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2023
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Thank you very much Sandra! A very supportive review. I appreciate also the good wishes.
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You are welcome.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Wonderful entry for the 4-8-4 writing prompt contest.
Good syllables count and connection between lines.
.love magic.. (*=*)
I love the imagery and presentation.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2023
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Wonderful entry for the 4-8-4 writing prompt contest.
Good syllables count and connection between lines.
.love magic.. (*=*)
I love the imagery and presentation.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus
Comment Written 31-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2023
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Thank you! I am so pleased you like it.Thanks too for the good wishes.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A clever 4-8-4 and your words are so true here, words are powerful and when they are skilfully arranged in a poem they begin to conjure the magic you describe here, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2023
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A clever 4-8-4 and your words are so true here, words are powerful and when they are skilfully arranged in a poem they begin to conjure the magic you describe here, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 30-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2023
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Thank you for your wonderful review, Dolly!
Comment from Katherine2
How cleaver to use the art of magic to mirror it with writing. We, as writers
"conjure" from our "imagination" to become "alive," I believe. I appreciate your poem so much. With the slight of hand, words create a living, breathing, passionate dwelling. Well done.
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2023
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How cleaver to use the art of magic to mirror it with writing. We, as writers
"conjure" from our "imagination" to become "alive," I believe. I appreciate your poem so much. With the slight of hand, words create a living, breathing, passionate dwelling. Well done.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2023
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Thank you so much for a wonderful review. I am delighted that you enjoyed it a lot, and also I thank you for the honour of six beautiful stars. Greatly appreciated!
Comment from jmdg1954
writers conjure
magic through imagination words come alive!
I like your 4-8-4 poem regarding writers.
It makes loads of sense.
Best of luck in the contest.
John
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2023
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writers conjure
magic through imagination words come alive!
I like your 4-8-4 poem regarding writers.
It makes loads of sense.
Best of luck in the contest.
John
Comment Written 29-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2023
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Thank you very much, John, for your nice words and also the good wishes. A lovely review!
Comment from harmony13
The first two lines of this poem flow and connect well. The last line
says it all! I enjoyed this 4-8-4 poem. The author words are thought
provoking and using imagination is fun! The artwork is awesome and
compliments the words and theme of this poem.
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reply by the author on 30-Jan-2023
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The first two lines of this poem flow and connect well. The last line
says it all! I enjoyed this 4-8-4 poem. The author words are thought
provoking and using imagination is fun! The artwork is awesome and
compliments the words and theme of this poem.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2023
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Thank you very much, Harmony! I am glad you enjoyed it.
