Soulful Dusk
Haibun6 total reviews
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I like this peaceful journey to death. I know my father is watching over me. I often feel his presence. I do feel our loved ones are there to help. Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem with us.
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2023
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I like this peaceful journey to death. I know my father is watching over me. I often feel his presence. I do feel our loved ones are there to help. Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem with us.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2023
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Thank you very much, Barbara, I appreciate your kind review and helpfull feedback.
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Comment from Sugarray77
This is so beautiful and the combination of prose and the subsequent haiku meld into a delightful verse. I love your theme and the descriptive phrases of how our spirits inhabit nature. Beautifully worded.
Melissa
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2023
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This is so beautiful and the combination of prose and the subsequent haiku meld into a delightful verse. I love your theme and the descriptive phrases of how our spirits inhabit nature. Beautifully worded.
Melissa
Comment Written 30-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2023
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Thank you very much, Melissa, I appreciate your kind review and helpfull feedback.
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Comment from AP Apgar
I like this poem very much- excellent picture presentation- Poem flows well and has depth and meaning - requiring forethought beyond a mere syllable count- paints a picture of possibilities- exhibiting love and care for those left behind- as well as a vision of heavenly beauty and peace- nice job AP
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2023
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I like this poem very much- excellent picture presentation- Poem flows well and has depth and meaning - requiring forethought beyond a mere syllable count- paints a picture of possibilities- exhibiting love and care for those left behind- as well as a vision of heavenly beauty and peace- nice job AP
Comment Written 29-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2023
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Thank you very much, ap, you are very kind.
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Comment from Jasmine Girl
What a beautiful and poetic poem about human's last journey. I like its cheerful and optimistic tone. I like the alliteration between "Stitch" and "Soulful", "evergreen" and "Effervescent".
The presentation is amazing.
Excellent.
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2023
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What a beautiful and poetic poem about human's last journey. I like its cheerful and optimistic tone. I like the alliteration between "Stitch" and "Soulful", "evergreen" and "Effervescent".
The presentation is amazing.
Excellent.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2023
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Lisa, thank you very much for your exceptional six stars review and kind feedback.
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Comment from lyenochka
That's a peaceful view of death. I like the "soulful journey" that you described and closeness that will continue as the family remembers the narrator through observing nature.
When is dark, I (it's)
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2023
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That's a peaceful view of death. I like the "soulful journey" that you described and closeness that will continue as the family remembers the narrator through observing nature.
When is dark, I (it's)
Comment Written 29-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2023
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Thank you very much, big sister. I appreciate your kind and helpful review. I corrected that error.
Love,
Marival ❤️
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
I very much liked especially your Haiku that describes a beautiful journey of death, moving on to the future. Such a wonderful journey must herald a bright follow-up to life on earth. kay
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2023
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I very much liked especially your Haiku that describes a beautiful journey of death, moving on to the future. Such a wonderful journey must herald a bright follow-up to life on earth. kay
Comment Written 29-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent five stars review and kind feedback.
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