Comment from Ricky1024

Excellent

The Painted picture has a Theme and purpose.
Rich in Imagery, it also read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
Thanks for sharing this and have a blessed day.
Doctor Ricky

 Comment Written 04-Feb-2023

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reply by the author on 05-Feb-2023

Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from kahpot

Excellent

Ha! Ha! not sure if this was meant to be humorous, yet I can imagine relating this to human feelings, if you decide to late, you are left with only what is left, very well written****kahpot

 Comment Written 01-Feb-2023

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reply by the author on 02-Feb-2023

Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.

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Comment from Mike Stevens

Excellent

Another fine poem, Gypsy...brings back painful memories of 7th grade art class. I like all things creative
But art isn't one of them, mostly because I suck at it, and have always sucked at it. Even drawing a stick man is beyond my artistic capabilities!!

 Comment Written 30-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 30-Jan-2023

You are a singer, lyrics composer, and poet, you are an artist.

Thank you for reading and reviewing my poem.

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Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

For some reason, I find this Haiku funny. Most people do paint colorful fruit, but cauliflower is good. I like to eat it, raw or cooked. Of course, it doesn't have the pretty color of other vegetables or fruits. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 30-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 30-Jan-2023

Thank you very much, Barbara, I appreciate your kind review and helpfull feedback.

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Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Because "cauliflowers" are winter vegetables and can be used for a botanic still life? That's shows us a lot about seasons and also about the needs of the artist.

 Comment Written 30-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 30-Jan-2023

Thank you very much, big sister. There's a lot to be said about starving artists....lol..., I appreciate your kind review and insightful feedback. Love.

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reply by lyenochka on 30-Jan-2023

Yes, Van Gogh even wanted to eat his paints at one point!

Comment from Katherine2

Excellent

Interesting play on what the reader can take from this. The reader is allowed to make their own vision. This I find quite refreshing. Does your poem allow me room to banter with "reason," yes, it does. The simple words of "apple" and "cauliflower" become issue driven for me as a reader to look deeper into more than just still life. Thank you.

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 30-Jan-2023

Thank you very much, Kate, you are very kind. I appreciate your time.

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Comment from AP Apgar

Excellent

I like your modern Haiku poem- nice picture presentation supporting the narrative- good flew and connection between lines- cute theme reminds- when the world comes up lemons - make lemonade- good job AP

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 30-Jan-2023

Thank you very much, ap, I appreciate your kind review and helpfull feedback.

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Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)

Excellent

This certainly pulled us out of the era of classical still-life painting into a more mordern world. It reminded me oddly, of the words of Lewis Carroll, with his cabbages and Kings. kay

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 30-Jan-2023

I appreciate your kind review and helpfull feedback.

Gypsy hugs