Comment from JT traveller

Excellent

Another fantastic poem. I appreciate the changes in style you utilise depending on the message you wish to deliver

Carefully chosen words to create a thoroughly enjoyable, romantic piece of poetry

 Comment Written 04-Feb-2023

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reply by the author on 04-Feb-2023

Thank you so very much, as always very much appreciated****kahpot

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This looping acrostic poem, HEARTS IN PAIN, has the proper vertical first letter formatting and seems to suggest that bad experiences in early love negative effects people thereafter.

 Comment Written 03-Feb-2023

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reply by the author on 03-Feb-2023

Thank you very much, as always very much appreciated****kahpot

Comment from Wendy G

Excellent

Acrostics are quite difficult to do in a meaningful way, so to combine that with a Loop Poem is quite special. It reminded me of Romeo and Juliet, (and all other star-crossed lovers too), and it was most poignant, sad, yearning and wistful. Beautiful.
Wendy

 Comment Written 03-Feb-2023

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reply by the author on 03-Feb-2023

Thank you for your wonderful comments, I enjoyed trying this form again, as always very much appreciated****kahpot

Comment from CrystieCookie999

Excellent

This sure reminded me of Romeo and Juliet. Or maybe "West Side Story" as well. Stunning color photo to illustrate this. This looks like a hard form to master. I only found one line I tripped a bit on:
Neglect that parted soul's so pure

I think you might have meant: Neglect that parted souls so pure (just take out the apostrophe)
Romantic angst at its best!

 Comment Written 02-Feb-2023

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reply by the author on 03-Feb-2023

Thank you so very much for your wonderful and helpful comments, my punctuation and grammar are getting better, as always very much appreciated****kahpot

Comment from Sugarray77

Excellent

What an excellent and eloquent Loop poem, Kim. You embedded each line with emotion, angst and longing.... it just dripped with it. I so wish I had a six to give to you. Well done!!

Melissa

 Comment Written 02-Feb-2023

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reply by the author on 02-Feb-2023

Thank you so very much, I did enjoy trying this form again, as always very much appreciated****kahpot

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Nice Looping Acrostic poem. It's very romantic and sad. It's very hard to be apart the one you love.

Nice presentation and picture.

Well done, kym.

Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus

 Comment Written 02-Feb-2023

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reply by the author on 02-Feb-2023

Thank you, your years of help and advice maybe paying off, as always very much appreciated****kahpot

Comment from susand3022

Excellent

Funny how things like that will happen in life, Kahpot. I suppose that what is meant to be, will just be, no matter what parents try to do. I'm glad the kids found a way to be together no matter what their parents wanted. I bet they're all pleased about it now.
Susan :)

 Comment Written 02-Feb-2023

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reply by the author on 02-Feb-2023

Thank you Susan, not quite pleased but now have no say, as always very much appreciated****kahpot

Comment from Cindy Decker 2

Excellent

Kahpot,
This is a really great looping acrostic poem. The red lettering looks like love bleeding. I can feel this couples pain.
"Memory's truth
Truth that bleeds."
Very beautiful phrase.
Good luck with this
Blessings,
Cindy

 Comment Written 02-Feb-2023

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reply by the author on 02-Feb-2023

Thank you very much, I enjoyed joining these two forms, as always very much appreciated****kahpot

Comment from jacquelyn popp

Excellent

You did a good job with writing this. I enjoyed reading it. I haven't read too many poems with the loop form, but found this a great read. Well done with your word flow. Beautiful artwork that you chose for this writing. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 02-Feb-2023

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reply by the author on 02-Feb-2023

Thank you so very much, as always very much appreciated****kahpot

Comment from John Ciarmello

Excellent

Kahpot, this is a gorgeous piece telling of the struggles of this young couple with their parent's interjections in their lives. Your words capture it all quite well. Best, JohnC

 Comment Written 02-Feb-2023

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reply by the author on 02-Feb-2023

Thank you JohnC, I like trying these forms together, as always very much appreciated****kahpot