I Wasn't There to Save Her
7 Words or Less contest entry5 total reviews
Comment from Kaiku
Of all the prompts I read, yours cut like a knife. The picture was terribly wrong, ,meaning it was just the right one to express the agony. I had my entry but I voted for you on this one. Good work.
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2023
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Of all the prompts I read, yours cut like a knife. The picture was terribly wrong, ,meaning it was just the right one to express the agony. I had my entry but I voted for you on this one. Good work.
Comment Written 02-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2023
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Wow, thank you for the great review and giving up your own vote, Kaiku. Too often I feel like the man in the picture. Fentanyl took my daughter 5 months ago. If I had know she was messing with that crap, I would have taken her away from there. I really appreciate the stars and support, Kaiku. Thanks again.
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Man, sorry for your loss.
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Thank you, friend.
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Yes
Comment from country ranch writer
So sad to have to go through that. But it is true the last words stick with you forever.death keeps no schedule we can't always be there at that precise moment in time.
Wedensday1/2/2023.
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2023
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So sad to have to go through that. But it is true the last words stick with you forever.death keeps no schedule we can't always be there at that precise moment in time.
Wedensday1/2/2023.
Comment Written 01-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2023
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Thank you for the great review, Barb. She was 36 and into very dangerous drugs apparently. If I had known, I would have clearly taken her away from that whole mess. 5 months later and I still can't forgive myself. I really appreciate the gracious stars, B. Thank you again.
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
This is a powerful entry in the "Seven Words or Less" poetry contest. The text is a great size. The message is clearly stated and easily understood. It is a parent's nightmare and is heartbreaking. Very emotive message!
The visual fits perfectly. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2023
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This is a powerful entry in the "Seven Words or Less" poetry contest. The text is a great size. The message is clearly stated and easily understood. It is a parent's nightmare and is heartbreaking. Very emotive message!
The visual fits perfectly. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 01-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2023
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Thank you for the kind review, Sandra. I really appreciate the generous stars and good luck wishes. I'm glad you liked the piece.
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You are welcome.
Comment from jacquelyn popp
Great contest entry. I like how you emphasized the word Daddy, with the punctuation. Good job with that. Nicely done. Great photo to go with your poem. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2023
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Great contest entry. I like how you emphasized the word Daddy, with the punctuation. Good job with that. Nicely done. Great photo to go with your poem. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 01-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2023
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Thank you for the great review and stars, Jacquelyn. I'm glad you liked the piece.
Comment from papa55mike
The grief in that one statement is extremely powerful. It reminds me of the Hemingway poem. Baby shoes, for sale, never worn. What a wonderfully written entry.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2023
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The grief in that one statement is extremely powerful. It reminds me of the Hemingway poem. Baby shoes, for sale, never worn. What a wonderfully written entry.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 01-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2023
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Thank you for the great review and big sixer, Mike. It was 5 months ago. She was 36 and messing with dangerous drugs. I didn't even know or I would have gotten her out of there. Now my baby's gone. I really appreciate the generous rating and good luck wishes, friend. I'm glad you liked the piece. Have yourself a great day as well and thank you again.
