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Comment from AP Apgar
i like your tanks poem- good picture presentation- story line is interesting- the doe and the Buck do usually take different paths - the wounded deer will usually run - and then lay down- the poem shifts from the wounded doe to the frozen creek and then raging river - couldn't quite see how tie them all together- doe creek river- creek is a small stream- river is a much larger body of water - not important- just how my mind pictures it- good job AP
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2023
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i like your tanks poem- good picture presentation- story line is interesting- the doe and the Buck do usually take different paths - the wounded deer will usually run - and then lay down- the poem shifts from the wounded doe to the frozen creek and then raging river - couldn't quite see how tie them all together- doe creek river- creek is a small stream- river is a much larger body of water - not important- just how my mind pictures it- good job AP
Comment Written 03-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2023
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Thank you very much, my friend. It's good to hear from you. Have a wonderful weekend.
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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a sad story as often wounded animals die of their injuries and there is much sadness in these words and this doe is parted from her mate and her path is cold and damning, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2023
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This is a sad story as often wounded animals die of their injuries and there is much sadness in these words and this doe is parted from her mate and her path is cold and damning, love Dolly x
Comment Written 02-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
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Comment from Hitcher
Hello my friend, it has been awhile : )) I can definitely relate to your well written, beautifully crafted, stunning visually presented Tanka. Being one who does go hunting from time to time. I was out over Xmas holidays, summer here though so no Icey rivers to succumb to.
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2023
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Hello my friend, it has been awhile : )) I can definitely relate to your well written, beautifully crafted, stunning visually presented Tanka. Being one who does go hunting from time to time. I was out over Xmas holidays, summer here though so no Icey rivers to succumb to.
Comment Written 01-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2023
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Hello, Hatcher, it has been a long time. I think of you from time to time and wondered what happened. Thank you very much for your exceptional six stars review, and kind words.
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Live is good my friend, busy but good. Both my daughters are a university now. Ahlee starts this month and here sister, Sera starts her 3rd year.
I hope you and yours are doing A ok ?
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Yes, I'm doing well. I'm happy you're good too. (*÷*)
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Comment from Dr. Nad
You express thoughts so susinctly in this ancient Japanese style. The beauty of nature can be easily missed or ignored but only to our peril. Thanks for your contributions to us.
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2023
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You express thoughts so susinctly in this ancient Japanese style. The beauty of nature can be easily missed or ignored but only to our peril. Thanks for your contributions to us.
Comment Written 01-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
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You are most welcome.
Comment from kahpot
This is beautifully done, though so very sad as your words portray the image of the wounded deer being swept away, so very well written and presented****kahpot
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2023
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This is beautifully done, though so very sad as your words portray the image of the wounded deer being swept away, so very well written and presented****kahpot
Comment Written 01-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2023
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Thank you very much for your exceptional six stars review, and kind words.
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Comment from jacquelyn popp
Great poem with a beautiful photo added. Your words flow nicely, and made this an enjoyable read. It was a delightful read actually. I especially appreciate your notes, to explaing more about what a Tanka is. I honestly had no idea what it was, even though I have read a few of them here on this site. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2023
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Great poem with a beautiful photo added. Your words flow nicely, and made this an enjoyable read. It was a delightful read actually. I especially appreciate your notes, to explaing more about what a Tanka is. I honestly had no idea what it was, even though I have read a few of them here on this site. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 01-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from prettybluebirds
Here is some more of your lovely poetry. I like the way you add all the beautiful colors to every poem. The words have such a wonderful flow, which makes the poem delightful to read.
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2023
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Here is some more of your lovely poetry. I like the way you add all the beautiful colors to every poem. The words have such a wonderful flow, which makes the poem delightful to read.
Comment Written 01-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs
