Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)

Excellent

This Naani made me wish I'd been there in the olden days. There must have been so much wonderful poetry written that didn't survive until today. Just like now. How few people will read so much of what we write. How sad! kay

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 Comment Written 02-Feb-2023

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reply by the author on 03-Feb-2023

Thank you. I appreciate your excellent review and kind feedback.

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Comment from tfawcus

Exceptional

Very nicely done. I have read some of Lorca's poems in translation. Not an ideal way, for so many of the nuances of language are lost. However, your poem condenses the sense and origins of his poetic impulse beautifully.

 Comment Written 02-Feb-2023

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reply by the author on 03-Feb-2023

Thank you, Tony, your exceptional six stars review means a great deal to me coming from you. I'm happy you like it.

I know what you mean about how much is lost in translation... I read Japanese haiku translated to English and it definitely loses the magic.

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Comment from Cindy Decker 2

Excellent

Gypsy,
Excellent naani poem, Gypsy.
You've captured the essence and passion of the Bard, toiling over his timeless works.
Great work. Excellent presentation.
Good luck.
Blessings,
Cindy

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 Comment Written 02-Feb-2023

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reply by the author on 03-Feb-2023

Thank you. I appreciate your excellent review and kind feedback.

Gypsy hugs

reply by Cindy Decker 2 on 03-Feb-2023

You?re welcome, Gypsy.