In the Air
a 5-7-514 total reviews
Comment from Verna Cole Mitchell
This is a lovely poem. I like the alliteration of the first line, the phrase "rain-scented breezes.'' and the idea of their swaying as an introduction to a storm. The picture illustrates the poem well. I hope this does well in the contest.
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2023
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This is a lovely poem. I like the alliteration of the first line, the phrase "rain-scented breezes.'' and the idea of their swaying as an introduction to a storm. The picture illustrates the poem well. I hope this does well in the contest.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2023
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Thank you so much for your kind words. So glad you enjoyed the poem. I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment.
Comment from jaded831
You captured the fresh scent in the air before a storm. Adding fresh spring blossoms to your poem, gave it a magical touch. Together they make a winning combination. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2023
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You captured the fresh scent in the air before a storm. Adding fresh spring blossoms to your poem, gave it a magical touch. Together they make a winning combination. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2023
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Thank you so much for your kind words. I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment.
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
This is a beautifully stated Nature 5-7-5 entry. The text is a great size. I like that it is centered on the visual. It makes the text more prominent. The message is clearly presented and easily understood. The visual fits perfectly. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2023
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This is a beautifully stated Nature 5-7-5 entry. The text is a great size. I like that it is centered on the visual. It makes the text more prominent. The message is clearly presented and easily understood. The visual fits perfectly. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2023
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So glad you liked this one. I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment.
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You are welcome.
Comment from Wendy G
Excellent 5-7-5, with a superb presentation. Accurate depiction, as one can indeed smell the the rain in breezes when a storm is approaching. Well done. Good wishes for your entry.
Wendy
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2023
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Excellent 5-7-5, with a superb presentation. Accurate depiction, as one can indeed smell the the rain in breezes when a storm is approaching. Well done. Good wishes for your entry.
Wendy
Comment Written 04-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2023
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Thank you, Wendy, for your kind words. I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment.
Comment from lyenochka
Sounds like a spring storm which would be much more welcome than this winter storm we're having. I liked the "rain-scented breezes-" as you not only bring up the color of the pink blossoms but the smell of the rain which gives double-sensory experience. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2023
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Sounds like a spring storm which would be much more welcome than this winter storm we're having. I liked the "rain-scented breezes-" as you not only bring up the color of the pink blossoms but the smell of the rain which gives double-sensory experience. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 03-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2023
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Yes, Helen, I am done with winter though ours has been mild and light on the snow. Thanks for taking the time to read and review.
Comment from Anne Johnston
What a beautiful picture of spring blossoms. A good reminder that even if we are in a deep freeze, that spring will come. This meets the syllable requirement and speaks of nature as contest required.
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2023
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What a beautiful picture of spring blossoms. A good reminder that even if we are in a deep freeze, that spring will come. This meets the syllable requirement and speaks of nature as contest required.
Comment Written 03-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2023
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I am so ready for spring! Thanks so much for taking the time to read and review.
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You are welcome
Comment from Aiona
What a lovely haiku. It follows the 5-7-5 syllable format, and I can picture it. I can almost smell the pink blossoms. And there's the anticipation of a shower of petals with the storm. Very visual. A word painting. I think that's exactly what the haiku form is supposed to be!
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2023
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What a lovely haiku. It follows the 5-7-5 syllable format, and I can picture it. I can almost smell the pink blossoms. And there's the anticipation of a shower of petals with the storm. Very visual. A word painting. I think that's exactly what the haiku form is supposed to be!
Comment Written 03-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2023
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Thank you so much for your kind words and the lovely six stars! I love the idea of a 'word painting.' I appreciate you taking the time to read and review.
Comment from harmony13
The first two lines of this poem flow and connect well. The last line puts
the poem all together. I like how this author describes the "sway in
rain-scented breezes" before the storm! The artwork is awesome and
compliments this poem well.
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2023
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The first two lines of this poem flow and connect well. The last line puts
the poem all together. I like how this author describes the "sway in
rain-scented breezes" before the storm! The artwork is awesome and
compliments this poem well.
Comment Written 03-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2023
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Thank you, Maria, for letting me know what you liked! Always appreciated! Thanks for taking the time to read and review.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I adore the blossom and you brought the scene to life here with your well chosen words to describe those pink petalled trees in spring, a magical write, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2023
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I adore the blossom and you brought the scene to life here with your well chosen words to describe those pink petalled trees in spring, a magical write, love Dolly x
Comment Written 03-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2023
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Thank you, Dolly, for your kind words. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review.
Comment from Mary Shifman
This gorgeous poem makes me think of Spring--just what I need tonight. It's supposed to get really cold on Friday -19 F. I think it's the night time low. At least I hope so. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2023
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This gorgeous poem makes me think of Spring--just what I need tonight. It's supposed to get really cold on Friday -19 F. I think it's the night time low. At least I hope so. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 02-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2023
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It was cold here over the weekend, too. I am ready for spring as well. Thank you, Mary, for your kind words and for taking the time to read and review.
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You are welcome.
