Change of Scenery
150-word flash15 total reviews
Comment from Karyn2
A great write! I love getting to the end of Flash writes with a twist and then reading a second time to enjoy with enlightened eyes! Descriptive and cleverly written with a satisfying short plot progression. Poor Louis!
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2023
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A great write! I love getting to the end of Flash writes with a twist and then reading a second time to enjoy with enlightened eyes! Descriptive and cleverly written with a satisfying short plot progression. Poor Louis!
Comment Written 04-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2023
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Thanks, Karyn, for your kind words. So glad you liked it. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review.
Comment from John Ciarmello
Hi, Faith! This is a great entry for the flash fiction contest. I believe his change of scenery was due to his getting married to the girl who likes the Lobster. Nice ending! Best, JohnC
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Hi, Faith! This is a great entry for the flash fiction contest. I believe his change of scenery was due to his getting married to the girl who likes the Lobster. Nice ending! Best, JohnC
Comment Written 04-Feb-2023
Comment from royowen
Heh heh, poor Louis, talk about a colour change from being a dull, brown colour, he became both colourful and dinner, what a change, particularly seeing he was surrounded by green, beautiful written, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2023
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Heh heh, poor Louis, talk about a colour change from being a dull, brown colour, he became both colourful and dinner, what a change, particularly seeing he was surrounded by green, beautiful written, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 04-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2023
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Thanks, Roy, for your kind words. Glad it made you chuckle. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review.
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Well done
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
Good one! He ended up seeing and laying on green, so lucky him! Or maybe not.
I first thought Louis was a cat being dumped somewhere, which would have made me really sad, lol!
Great story and ending. Good luck with the contest.
Pam
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2023
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Good one! He ended up seeing and laying on green, so lucky him! Or maybe not.
I first thought Louis was a cat being dumped somewhere, which would have made me really sad, lol!
Great story and ending. Good luck with the contest.
Pam
Comment Written 04-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2023
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Thanks, Pam, for your kind words. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review.
Comment from JT traveller
Great ending. So Louis was a lobster! Haha. Very clever.
I thoroughly enjoyed reading this flash fiction. It flowed well and told a good, if unexpected story. Great work.
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reply by the author on 05-Feb-2023
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Great ending. So Louis was a lobster! Haha. Very clever.
I thoroughly enjoyed reading this flash fiction. It flowed well and told a good, if unexpected story. Great work.
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Comment Written 04-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2023
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So glad you enjoyed it, Jacquelyn. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review.
