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Acrostic (loving you)

An Acrostic Poem

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Comment from jessizero
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This was a beautiful acrostic poem. As most people who know me know, I suck at acrostic poems and I have bad luck in love. Still, I can appreciate both. I enjoyed your poem very much. You followed the prompt exactly. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 07-Feb-2023


reply by the author on 07-Feb-2023
    Thank you so very much, when I first started writing poems I did not know what an acrostic was, I just like the form and practiced, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
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Gorgeous poem that proves love can be everlasting. Writing an acrostic poem is fun to write. Like the wording which entails each line. I see you did well with this poem.

 Comment Written 07-Feb-2023


reply by the author on 07-Feb-2023
    Thank you so very much, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
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This is a well-stated acrostic entry. I wish you had made the first letters running vertical red. You did make them bold, but they do not stand out.
The text is a great size. The message is clearly stated. The visual fits perfectly. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 05-Feb-2023


reply by the author on 05-Feb-2023
    Thank you very much
reply by Sandra Nelms-Ludwig on 05-Feb-2023
    You are welcome.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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A loving acrostic poem and I enjoyed your matching rhymes and warm sentiments. Friendship and honesty are the key components in any relationship and I am glad you mentioned those here, being united and sharing everything is also essential for it to be long lasting, along with trust and fidelity, much enjoyed, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 05-Feb-2023


reply by the author on 05-Feb-2023
    Thank you very much
Comment from harmony13
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This is a beautiful love poem! The author's words are filled with meaning.
I like the opening line of this poem which I feel is what love is all about!
I also enjoyed the last line as it says so much with simplicity. The poem
flows and connects well. The artwork is awesome! Have a great Sunday!

 Comment Written 05-Feb-2023


reply by the author on 05-Feb-2023
    Thank you very much
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
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This is a clever acrostic poem for the contest, covering the whole period of a loving relationship that I read as the description of a marriage. I enjoyed it very much, thanks for sharing. kay

 Comment Written 05-Feb-2023


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    Thank you very much
Comment from Ricky1024
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This Acrostic was well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
Good luck with your contest entry and have a blessed Sabbath Sunday.
Doctor Ricky

 Comment Written 05-Feb-2023


reply by the author on 05-Feb-2023
    Thank you very much
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
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This acrostic poem simply tells how love begins and what is the present state and status of love, today unmasked love seems grown and nourished as love has shown so is the stand of love seems and felt in relation; well said; ALCREARTOR LITT DEAR

 Comment Written 05-Feb-2023


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    Thank you very much
Comment from jmdg1954
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The acrostic, Loving You, is well written. Each letter of the acrostic signifies a feeling or attribute in your relationship. Your rhyme scheme is spot on, good cadence and flow.
I enjoyed the read.
Best of luck in the contest.
John

 Comment Written 04-Feb-2023


reply by the author on 04-Feb-2023
    Thank you very much
Comment from JT traveller
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Beautiful acrostic poem which does not seem at all forced the follow the rules of poetry.

A loving tribute to your special one. Great word choice and flow of form.

 Comment Written 04-Feb-2023


reply by the author on 04-Feb-2023
    Thank you so very much, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2023
    I am so sorry I should not have signed this reply, please forgive
reply by JT traveller on 04-Feb-2023
    No forgiveness needed. Have a great day