Be Wee With Bea Part 3
Viewing comments for Chapter 5 "The Growly Puppy"Third in a series is quite sad in the beginning.
10 total reviews
Comment from prettybluebirds
This is a sweet book that almost any child would love to have read to them. I'm far from childhood but I enjoyed the story very much. It is well-written and the descriptions are vivid. Nice writing.
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2023
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This is a sweet book that almost any child would love to have read to them. I'm far from childhood but I enjoyed the story very much. It is well-written and the descriptions are vivid. Nice writing.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2023
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Thank you for your involved appreciative review. I'm glad you are enjoying it. If you have missed any chapters, feel free to go to my portfolio. There is no need for a review...just enjoy.
Comment from CrystieCookie999
I liked reading this selection. I thought it would be even better with dialogue, even though I see how you are using the narrator voice to help tie action and thoughts together.
Here is a good line: She felt young again, strolling, listening to the wind cry as the cool air licked her face.
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2023
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I liked reading this selection. I thought it would be even better with dialogue, even though I see how you are using the narrator voice to help tie action and thoughts together.
Here is a good line: She felt young again, strolling, listening to the wind cry as the cool air licked her face.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2023
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Thank you for your involved appreciative review. I'm glad you are enjoying it. You are the first one to recognize the narrator. If you have missed any chapters, feel free to go to my portfolio. There is no need for a review...just enjoy.
Comment from Brett Matthew West
Though not back do have time to write a review.
It only takes one in a group to make everyone around them unconfortable (re Paragraph One).
Stand up to a bully, whether a two-legged variety, or a puppy. Best way to handle them.
Stormy proves to be no more than a troublemaker. Somethings never change.
"kettle of fish" is a cliche. Might be better if this could be somehow be reworded so it is not.
The problems arose when Bea returned sounds like the puppies were mad she left them alone.
Willow sounds like a good listener for the youngsters to vent to.
Probably do not need "the mom" after Bea. Her identity is well established by that point.
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2023
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Though not back do have time to write a review.
It only takes one in a group to make everyone around them unconfortable (re Paragraph One).
Stand up to a bully, whether a two-legged variety, or a puppy. Best way to handle them.
Stormy proves to be no more than a troublemaker. Somethings never change.
"kettle of fish" is a cliche. Might be better if this could be somehow be reworded so it is not.
The problems arose when Bea returned sounds like the puppies were mad she left them alone.
Willow sounds like a good listener for the youngsters to vent to.
Probably do not need "the mom" after Bea. Her identity is well established by that point.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2023
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Thank you for your involved review.
Comment from aryr
This was considered great, Liz, actually rather fantastic. I really appreciated your narrative notes for their honesty because they really told the truth. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessings n hugs!
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2023
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This was considered great, Liz, actually rather fantastic. I really appreciated your narrative notes for their honesty because they really told the truth. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessings n hugs!
Comment Written 07-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2023
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Thank you for your involved, supportive review. I'm glad you enjoyed it. This is quite accurate. Zoe was responsible for Maureen having to put Annie down. So Zoe lived with Sweet Puppy & me, then when we moved in with Maureen, Zoe lived with Sherrie & Stormy. More to come.
Comment from lyenochka
I'm glad that Bea felt she could "be good to herself" and get out in the sunshine and leave Zoe together with Sweet Puppy. But Sweet Puppy doesn't have the skills of Stormy. I wonder how they did when Bea was out visiting Willow. I like how Stormy's previous experience equipped him for dealing with characters like Zoe and understood that Zoe just wanted to be loved.
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2023
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I'm glad that Bea felt she could "be good to herself" and get out in the sunshine and leave Zoe together with Sweet Puppy. But Sweet Puppy doesn't have the skills of Stormy. I wonder how they did when Bea was out visiting Willow. I like how Stormy's previous experience equipped him for dealing with characters like Zoe and understood that Zoe just wanted to be loved.
Comment Written 06-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2023
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Thank you for your wonderfully supportive review. This stuff actually did happen with Zoe & Annie & she was aggressive with my Sweet Puppy, who of course got in terrible fights with her around me. & she miraculously got along with Stormy.
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Ah. Wish Stormy had given Sweet Puppy some training or tips!
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That would have been good. But she was a fighter. I think it was an adrenaline fix for her...lol
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Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
Everyone is trying to help Zoe be a better puppy. She just wants too much love without loving back. Willow is a good character because she tries to help others by listening to their sorrows and not telling anyone, although it makes her sad for them.
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2023
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Everyone is trying to help Zoe be a better puppy. She just wants too much love without loving back. Willow is a good character because she tries to help others by listening to their sorrows and not telling anyone, although it makes her sad for them.
Comment Written 05-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2023
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Thank you for your supportive review. I glad you enjoyed it.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this post with us. I really like the concept of the story and the use of vocabulary. Children will never learn it if they aren't exposed to it. You're doing a good job.
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2023
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Thank you for sharing this post with us. I really like the concept of the story and the use of vocabulary. Children will never learn it if they aren't exposed to it. You're doing a good job.
Comment Written 05-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2023
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Thank you for your positive review. I appreciate it.
Comment from eliz100
I enjoyed reading your story. I agree we do not need baby talk to reach four to sixth graders. Putting the issues in the animal world allows the reader to look at problems and solutions that do not get personal. There is no room for improvement. Have a blessed day.
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2023
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I enjoyed reading your story. I agree we do not need baby talk to reach four to sixth graders. Putting the issues in the animal world allows the reader to look at problems and solutions that do not get personal. There is no room for improvement. Have a blessed day.
Comment Written 05-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2023
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Thank you for your positive insightful review. I appreciate it.
Comment from strandregs
I have first second hand knowledge of the material.
Hearing stories without names.
They made a TV series here in England. " Tracy Beaker.
I hope reading your book will help with understanding young people and older people who were born into misfortune. :-))Z.
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2023
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I have first second hand knowledge of the material.
Hearing stories without names.
They made a TV series here in England. " Tracy Beaker.
I hope reading your book will help with understanding young people and older people who were born into misfortune. :-))Z.
Comment Written 05-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2023
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Thank you for your positive review. I appreciate it.
Comment from Ricky1024
This was well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
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My Complete Synopsis:
The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
Thanks for sharing this and have a blessed Sabbath Sunday!
Doctor Ricky
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2023
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This was well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
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My Complete Synopsis:
The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
Thanks for sharing this and have a blessed Sabbath Sunday!
Doctor Ricky
Comment Written 05-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2023
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Thank you for your positive review. I appreciate it. The same blessing on you.
