Another Day With You
Love Poem26 total reviews
Comment from rspoet
Hello Janet,
Outstanding description and imagery in your poem
of a morning walk with your husband.
Simplicity captures the essence of beauty
with perfect smooth meter that fills each stanza.
I love the variations on the repeated line
and the touch of internal rhyme.
Beautiful poem.
Best wishes to you and your husband.
Robert
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2023
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Hello Janet,
Outstanding description and imagery in your poem
of a morning walk with your husband.
Simplicity captures the essence of beauty
with perfect smooth meter that fills each stanza.
I love the variations on the repeated line
and the touch of internal rhyme.
Beautiful poem.
Best wishes to you and your husband.
Robert
Comment Written 07-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2023
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Thank you Robert for your exceptional review and extra stars and good wishes.
I'm glad you liked the variation of the last line in each stanza. I worried that it wouldn't work. I'm happy you liked it.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from tempeste
Ciao poet!,
I love to kick my day off by taking my early morning walk.
I'm not married but I used to take my dog with me until he passed away. In the beginning, it was lonely but now I enjoy it even on my own.
I live in the countryside and my town is surrounded by pine forests and chestnut trees.
I love the fresh air and the silence. and the sound of my footsteps.
Autumn is my all-time favourite season, love the sunset hues like in your pic.
Your poem was a delightful read!
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2023
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Ciao poet!,
I love to kick my day off by taking my early morning walk.
I'm not married but I used to take my dog with me until he passed away. In the beginning, it was lonely but now I enjoy it even on my own.
I live in the countryside and my town is surrounded by pine forests and chestnut trees.
I love the fresh air and the silence. and the sound of my footsteps.
Autumn is my all-time favourite season, love the sunset hues like in your pic.
Your poem was a delightful read!
Comment Written 07-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2023
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Thank you for the wonderful review and kind words. I greatly appreciate your comments. A walk is an excellent way to start the day.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
I hope that all goes well for you. As you say, we never know what is in the future, but so often things work out well. I enjoyed your poem very much, with the shift in the refrain showing us clearly your mood and your worries. Take care and be blessed. kay
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2023
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I hope that all goes well for you. As you say, we never know what is in the future, but so often things work out well. I enjoyed your poem very much, with the shift in the refrain showing us clearly your mood and your worries. Take care and be blessed. kay
Comment Written 07-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2023
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Thank you Kay for the wonderful review and kind words. I greatly appreciate your comments and good wishes.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from JT traveller
So truly romantic.
My favourite part,
"What's old is new when I'm with you.
Same smile that greets me every morn."
I say something similar to my husband
I will love you as long as your eyes are blue.
What a beautiful expression of love and a special bond between man and wife.
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2023
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So truly romantic.
My favourite part,
"What's old is new when I'm with you.
Same smile that greets me every morn."
I say something similar to my husband
I will love you as long as your eyes are blue.
What a beautiful expression of love and a special bond between man and wife.
Comment Written 06-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2023
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Thank you JT for the wonderful review and kind words. I greatly appreciate your comments and for sharing your favorite lies.
Blessings
Janet
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My pleasure. Jacqueline
Comment from ESOSTINE
Beautiful photo on sweet route of love. I well enjoyed the originality of the poem. How wonderful life can be when two hearts come together in love. Thanks for letting us into your world. Best of luck in the contest, dear Janet.
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2023
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Beautiful photo on sweet route of love. I well enjoyed the originality of the poem. How wonderful life can be when two hearts come together in love. Thanks for letting us into your world. Best of luck in the contest, dear Janet.
Comment Written 06-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2023
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Thank you for your thoughtful and encouraging review and good wishes.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from nancy_e_davis
You are so right. Give the ones you love all the time and affection you can because there are no guarantees of a tomorrow. Believe me I learned that very well over the Holiday's. Your poem ripped at my broken heart. Nancy:)
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2023
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You are so right. Give the ones you love all the time and affection you can because there are no guarantees of a tomorrow. Believe me I learned that very well over the Holiday's. Your poem ripped at my broken heart. Nancy:)
Comment Written 06-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2023
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Thank you Nancy for your heartfelt review.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Tom Horonzy
This piece is immensely sweet, and I hope that there will be many continuous days for you and yours. Have not seen submissions of yours of late, yet I understand.
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2023
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This piece is immensely sweet, and I hope that there will be many continuous days for you and yours. Have not seen submissions of yours of late, yet I understand.
Comment Written 06-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2023
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Thank you Tom for your thoughtful and encouraging review. It's been a bit busy these last few months and my husband will have a valve replacement next month so the busy times continue.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice image and presentation, Janet.
-I am sorry to hear about your husband
and hope he is better soon.
-You wrote a very good poem about
the love you have for each other.
-The imagery of how you feel during
the course of this day is excellent:
"Leaves swirl, then crunch beneath our feet."
-You include all of the senses, like
"Bold scent of coffee."
-The repeating phrases are effective,
and the conclusion touches our hearts.
-Thoughts and prayers are with you.
-I hope this has helped by sharing your feelings.
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2023
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-Nice image and presentation, Janet.
-I am sorry to hear about your husband
and hope he is better soon.
-You wrote a very good poem about
the love you have for each other.
-The imagery of how you feel during
the course of this day is excellent:
"Leaves swirl, then crunch beneath our feet."
-You include all of the senses, like
"Bold scent of coffee."
-The repeating phrases are effective,
and the conclusion touches our hearts.
-Thoughts and prayers are with you.
-I hope this has helped by sharing your feelings.
Comment Written 06-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2023
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Thank you Pam for your thoughtful and encouraging review and the special stars. It did help to write down my feelings and I'm thankful for the loving support of FanStory friends like you. Next month he will have the valve replacement procedure done but we are very confident that it will go well.
Blessings
Janet
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You are very welcome, Janet, and I appreciate your reply. I am sorry he has to have a procedure, but I am glad you are confident about it. You will be in my thoughts, and hope it all goes well.
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Thanks Pam. He is my rock and I am confident that all will go well.
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I know what you mean about have to rock to rely on, and that you have confidence about the procedure. That is a good thing.
Comment from rjuselius
A beautifully written piece of poetry dear Janet! The poem is colorfully written and gives a positive vibe.
Thank you for sharing!
Good luck in the contest!
Blessings,
Rebekka x
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2023
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A beautifully written piece of poetry dear Janet! The poem is colorfully written and gives a positive vibe.
Thank you for sharing!
Good luck in the contest!
Blessings,
Rebekka x
Comment Written 06-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2023
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Thank you Rebekka for the wonderful review and kind words. I greatly appreciate your comments and good wishes.
Blessings
Janet
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My pleasure entirely dear friend <3
Comment from June Sargent
Yes, we must embrace and be grateful for every moment we share with our loved ones. Tomorrow is not promised to any of us, with or without health problems. So live each moment to the fullest and enjoy each other's company. Thank you for the lovely reminder.
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2023
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Yes, we must embrace and be grateful for every moment we share with our loved ones. Tomorrow is not promised to any of us, with or without health problems. So live each moment to the fullest and enjoy each other's company. Thank you for the lovely reminder.
Comment Written 06-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2023
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Thank you June for your thoughtful and encouraging review. I always appreciate hearing from you.
Blessings
Janet
