Comment from Karyn2

Excellent

I enjoyed your collection of beautiful, simple, endearing moments that show such a rich connection and love that has lived and loved well. Your words are so gentle with a tone of comfort and contentment and warmth. Nicely expressed. Reading your notes: I'm so sorry to hear of your life's love and health issues. I too hope and pray you have many more of these rich days together.

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2023

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reply by the author on 06-Feb-2023

Thank you Karyn for your thoughtful and encouraging review and good wishes and especially your prayers.

Blessings
Janet

Comment from Pam Lonsdale

Excellent

What a beautiful expression of true love - being able to look forward to spending a simple day doing simple things together. When the physical love subsides, there's that feeling of comfort from another that is truly what makes each day worth living.

The only thing I didn't understand was Old Sol peeking through the mist. The sun?

Lovely entry for this contest - good luck!

Pam

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2023

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reply by the author on 07-Feb-2023

Thank you Pam for your wonderful review and kind words.

Sol is the Latin word for Sun. Sol is where we get the word "solar" and of course the "Sun" is in the center or our Solar System.

For me, it's just poetic.

Thanks again for your kind words.
Blessings
Janet

Comment from CrystieCookie999

Excellent

This is a sweet poem. My favorite line was this one:
My time and space begins with you.
I think you would change 'begins' to 'begin' because you have a plural subject (They begin). Good luck in that love contest.

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2023

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reply by the author on 07-Feb-2023

Thank you for the wonderful review. I greatly appreciate your kind comments.

Blessings
Janet

Comment from Marienkiefer

Excellent

A tender poem. From Old Sol appearing on a misty morn, to a morning walk.
-Readers can feel the cold brisk air of your poem, see vivid reds, and settle into the coziness of the poem, with sights,sounds and smells of the break of day...sealed with a kiss, and appeal to God to put the day on replay.
A most delightful read.

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2023

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reply by the author on 06-Feb-2023

Thank you for your thoughtful and encouraging review and good wishes. I'm so pleased that you like this one.

Blessings
Janet

Comment from Brandon Clark

Excellent

Very beautiful dedication poem and strong contender for the contest. Sorry to hear about the health concerns. Wouldn't change anything here...great job and best wishes for your spouse's health and good luck in the contest!!

 Comment Written 05-Feb-2023

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reply by the author on 06-Feb-2023

Thank you Brandon for your thoughtful and encouraging review and good wishes.

Blessings
Janet

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Saying a prayer for healing for your husband and that you will continue to have many more loving walks together as you described so well in this poem! Best wishes in the contest!

My time and space beings with you. (begins instead of "beings"?)

 Comment Written 05-Feb-2023

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reply by the author on 06-Feb-2023

Thank you for your thoughtful and encouraging review and good wishes. Also, thank you for finding my error. I appreciate your kindness.

Blessings
Janet

Comment from Mrs. KT

Exceptional

Hello, Janet!
How your well-crafted poem - and its inherent emotive and visual images - resonates with me.
I feel the very same emotions about my husband.
And truly, his smile awaits me every morn.

One tiny nit, I believe:
My time and space being (begins) with you.

Thank you for sharing.
Beautiful sentiments...

diane

 Comment Written 05-Feb-2023

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reply by the author on 06-Feb-2023

Thank you Diane for your thoughtful and encouraging review. I've noticed in some of your poems that I though you and I have some of the same emotions concerning our husband and family.
Thank you too for the kind correction and making that line in my poem make more sense.

Blessings
Janet

reply by Mrs. KT on 06-Feb-2023

We do share many, many similar thoughts and emotions, Janet, concerning our husbands and families.
That's why I always look forward to your posts! :)
Here's to a beautiful week ahead!
diane

reply by the author on 06-Feb-2023

Thanks Diane. I wish that for you as well.

Janet

Comment from Aussie

Exceptional

More's the pity we can't leave earth together. Still, the bond is never broken. Take each day as a blessing, and hand your fears over to the Lord, for He knows our needs. A lovely poem entry for the Love Poem Contest. K xx

 Comment Written 05-Feb-2023

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reply by the author on 07-Feb-2023

Thank you Aussie for the thoughtful, encouraging and heartfelt review and for the special stars.
Blessings
Janet

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

I enjoyed this one's very much. There's really nothing in this world quite as special as walking out in the fresh air on a cold morning with someone you love or a good friend. Patricia

 Comment Written 05-Feb-2023

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reply by the author on 06-Feb-2023

Thank you Patricia for your thoughtful and encouraging review.

Blessings
Janet

Comment from harmony13

Excellent

This is truly a beautiful love poem. I like how the author expresses the
gratefulness of the love shared. Thank you for the author's notes - so
glad you are enjoying every moment! The artwork is beautiful and compliments the words and theme of this poem. Great Poem, Janet!

 Comment Written 05-Feb-2023

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reply by the author on 06-Feb-2023

Thank you for your thoughtful and encouraging review. O always appreciate hearing from you.

Blessings
Janet