Comment from nomi338

Excellent

The perfect answer to a lonely man's quest. We stumble in darkness in search of that one special one who will complete us. We often knock on the wrong door and are rebuffed, over and over again. Then one magical day love appears as if by magic. We are suddenly transformed, but at the same time a little bit fearful: "I hope I don't blow it."

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2023

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reply by the author on 06-Feb-2023

Right!

Comment from ESOSTINE

Excellent

Great piece dear Bill. The presence of your Angel turns your darkness into light and love. It is a beautiful compliment to a true love. Well done, and thanks for sharing your thoughts.

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2023

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reply by the author on 06-Feb-2023

Thanks, Esostine, for giving this a look.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

A wonderful write Bill and when my husband was very ill he called me his angel all the time. I was always there by his side to feed him and help him with anything he wanted to do. I am glad you also have an angel, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2023

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reply by the author on 06-Feb-2023

Thank you, Dolly

Comment from Sugarray77

Excellent

This is a very romantic thought, Bill. Now, if you personified it a bit, I could use it in my Valentine to hubby :). A well-written and endearing verse!!

Melissa

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2023

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reply by the author on 06-Feb-2023

Go with it!

Comment from Mary Vigasin

Excellent

Beautiful both in presentation and words. Enchanting is the right word for this 5-7-5 poem.
This I am sure would have been a contest winner.
Best wishes
Mary

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2023

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reply by the author on 06-Feb-2023

Thanks, Mary

Comment from Regina Elliott

Excellent

Hi Bill, ran out of 6 stars yesterday, as this is a very
enchanting short poem with
a beauteous design of art.
It draws this reader in. Quite
romantic and artistic. Many
blessings to you & yours.

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2023

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reply by the author on 06-Feb-2023

Thank you, Regina.

Comment from Jasmine Girl

Excellent

What a beautiful poem for a very nice art from an artist at FanArtReview. I really should look for art pieces there, too. This poem is not silly and even have a couple of alliterations.

Well done.

 Comment Written 05-Feb-2023

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reply by the author on 06-Feb-2023

Thanks, Lisa

reply by the author on 06-Feb-2023

Thanks, Lisa

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Someone who can change "loneliness to love" (great alliteration!) is an "angel" indeed. Cool picture and this should have been in the 5-7-5 contest. Nice!

 Comment Written 05-Feb-2023

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reply by the author on 06-Feb-2023

Thanks, Helen

reply by the author on 06-Feb-2023

Thanks, Helen

Comment from JT traveller

Excellent

Fantastic colour palette and selection of illustration to accompany your verse. It made me want to read it immediately!

So much said in so few words. Very cleverly done once again Bill

 Comment Written 05-Feb-2023

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reply by the author on 05-Feb-2023

Thanks, JT

reply by JT traveller on 05-Feb-2023

😁

Comment from kahpot

Excellent

When we first meet someone that starts the heart pumping, it is everything your words describe, loneliness leaves us, an excellent 5-7-5 poem, very well written and presented****kahpot

 Comment Written 05-Feb-2023

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reply by the author on 05-Feb-2023

Thanks, kahpot, giving this a look. Bill