Comment from jessizero

Excellent

I appreciate your 5-7-5. I counted your syllables, and you were right on target. Your poem made me feel peaceful. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

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 Comment Written 05-Feb-2023

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reply by the author on 05-Feb-2023

Thanks, Jessizero

Comment from dellsworthpoet

Excellent

A very nice short poem. The flow is good. The images are clear. The picture adds to the otherworldliness of the lines. The color scheme fits well with the poem.

Thanks for a good read.

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 Comment Written 05-Feb-2023

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reply by the author on 05-Feb-2023

Thanks, dp

reply by dellsworthpoet on 05-Feb-2023

You are welcome.