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Comment from Liz O'Neill
This is hilarious. I can see this happening. People just chat back and forth and don't even really pay attention to whom they're communicating. It was fun to read the opposing lines in different voices. So fun.
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2023
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This is hilarious. I can see this happening. People just chat back and forth and don't even really pay attention to whom they're communicating. It was fun to read the opposing lines in different voices. So fun.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2023
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Thank you so very much Liz, for the very lovely words for my poem.
Once again you are so kind and I appreciate it more than you could possibly know! Thanks again my dear friend!
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***Warm Hugs***
Comment from Wendy G
It can so easily happen. I've several times sent a message for my son to my daughter's phone. Worse if it is a love message sent to the wrong person, of course. Could be disastrous. Well written, and well presented.
Wendy
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2023
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It can so easily happen. I've several times sent a message for my son to my daughter's phone. Worse if it is a love message sent to the wrong person, of course. Could be disastrous. Well written, and well presented.
Wendy
Comment Written 08-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2023
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Awe, thanks Wendy. You are so very sweet and I love that I am not the only one. On my ipad I get my text messages so I don't have to use my iphone all the time. Well there is something that happens where it shows the new message coming in, even though you still may have the last message up. So I go to anwer one of my kids and send it to the other. So I am constantly getting a message back that says this: huh??? Lol, I think my kids wonder if I am not losing it. Haha! Thanks for the kind review, my sweet friend!!
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent poem about love ending with a very funny ending.
the rhymes didn't seem forced.
the structure make sense
it draw on my emotions
it presents strong images
I Would recommend it
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2023
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Excellent poem about love ending with a very funny ending.
the rhymes didn't seem forced.
the structure make sense
it draw on my emotions
it presents strong images
I Would recommend it
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
Comment Written 08-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2023
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Gypsy, I thank you so very much for always having nice things to say and being so thoughtful in your reviews. Your kind words are always so appreciated.
Comment from jessizero
Some relationships are like that. I've never texted stuff like this, though, and certainly not to the wrong number. Your poem was entertaining, though maybe not in a pleasant way. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2023
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Some relationships are like that. I've never texted stuff like this, though, and certainly not to the wrong number. Your poem was entertaining, though maybe not in a pleasant way. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 08-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2023
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Oh Jessi, I am sorry. My humor in this was never intended to hurt anyone, especially anyone as sweet as you are. If it helps, my nose is stinging really bad right now, from trying to keep the tears back. I never thought about it like that. It was just supposed to be two people thinking they were talking to the right person and had the wrong ones. I really am sorry. I just love you to much to think of ever bringing more pain to you.
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Please don?t be upset!!! I am overly sensitive right now and that is not your fault. I?m so sorry to upset you
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Sounds like we are both very sensitive, but it is my pet peeve that someone would say something to ever hurt someone and there are too many who don't think of that. Please just always know that it isn't me. You take care of yourself Sweetheart, and I have been meaning to tell you that your latest photo of yourself is so cute.
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Just know I would not want to hurt you either. Thank you for the compliment on my silly photo. :)
Comment from Paul McFarland
That's a good one, Debi. You had me going for a few minutes, then you hit me over the head with your finishing couplet. Maybe that wrong number might work out for her.
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2023
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That's a good one, Debi. You had me going for a few minutes, then you hit me over the head with your finishing couplet. Maybe that wrong number might work out for her.
Comment Written 08-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2023
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Hi Paul, thank you so much and you are so sweet. I thank you so very much for your lovely review and kind words for my poem. It's so appreciated, my dear friend!
Comment from MissMerri
Hahahahaha! This is so funny and clever. I sometimes get texts that I know were not intended for me at all, and I feel compelled to answer so the sender will know their intended recipient did not receive the message. It happens more than we might expect. This is a cute and fun poem and has such a melodic meter and great rhymes too. Well done Debi. MM
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2023
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Hahahahaha! This is so funny and clever. I sometimes get texts that I know were not intended for me at all, and I feel compelled to answer so the sender will know their intended recipient did not receive the message. It happens more than we might expect. This is a cute and fun poem and has such a melodic meter and great rhymes too. Well done Debi. MM
Comment Written 08-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2023
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Addona,, I hope you know what a special woman you are! You are so kind and f you have feedback. You are gracious and respectful, I want you to know how very much i appreciate that my very thoughtful and compassionate friend.
Comment from Moonbeams Musings 55
This has such a great surprise ending and it is so true. I am guilty of
sending a text message to the wrong person. I am sure that most people have mistakenly done that a time or two. The worst was when I complained about how expensive a perm was when it was only all cut off at the next appointment. I realized too late that I had mistakenly sent the text to my hair dresser instead of my sister. Oh boy I learned a valuable lesson. As usual,. a great poem.
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2023
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This has such a great surprise ending and it is so true. I am guilty of
sending a text message to the wrong person. I am sure that most people have mistakenly done that a time or two. The worst was when I complained about how expensive a perm was when it was only all cut off at the next appointment. I realized too late that I had mistakenly sent the text to my hair dresser instead of my sister. Oh boy I learned a valuable lesson. As usual,. a great poem.
Comment Written 07-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2023
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Oh Moonbeams, you do crack me up. How funny to be talking about a perm but accidentally sending to the place where you go that does the perms.
I really don't like boring so love to add a little fun sometimes. So glad you enjoyed it my sweet friend. Thanks so much!
Comment from nomi338
Maybe you need glasses. Or maybe you were playing a game that maybe backfired a little bit. I never thought of you as being a daredevil. A little devil, yes, but not a daredevil. I guess I was mistaken.
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2023
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Maybe you need glasses. Or maybe you were playing a game that maybe backfired a little bit. I never thought of you as being a daredevil. A little devil, yes, but not a daredevil. I guess I was mistaken.
Comment Written 07-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2023
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Hahaha, yes, I am a little devil, and a bit of a daredevil too. In fact I love crossing lines, just a little bit. But don't you think there's just a possibility that maybe I learned some of that from my big brother? Isn't it wonderful how imagination can be anything we want it to be, as writers. Actually I love shocking and surprise endings, and am having so much writing it. But I love that we are so close as friends and bro and sis!
But that is not imagination.for me.. I truly feel it and hope you do too.
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Of course. I must tell you, I thought I was your fan, but apparently I am not, since I am not made aware of your posts. I will take care of that immediately.
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Oh no, not again. We have done this a couple times and is it not sticking. Well I am stopping right now and fanning you again, and if it happens again, I will contact Tom. Thanks Nomi!
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It keeps telling me that I am already your fan. So I told it, tell me something I didn't already know. I'm not just a fan, but i adore the guy. Then why aren't they giving me notices of your work??
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Same here. That is exactly the same thing I am experiencing. It is frustrating as I do not want to miss a single post of yours.
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Me too.
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Debi,
This woman is probably very embarrassed to have texted these comments of love to the wrong guy. The guy must have been confused. But if her guy is so confused and insecure about the love, maybe they should break up.
Keep writing and stay healthy
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2023
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Hi Debi,
This woman is probably very embarrassed to have texted these comments of love to the wrong guy. The guy must have been confused. But if her guy is so confused and insecure about the love, maybe they should break up.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Comment Written 07-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2023
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Hi Joan, I love you really get into my stories. You are so much fun!
Thanks so much for your always great comments and fun review!
I hope you are enjoying our nice weather!
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You're welcome, Debi.
I am taking walks outside, finally. I hope you are enjoying the warmer weather too.
Joan
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
This is really a surprise ending indeed. There was a twist at the end. Like your writing so much. You are always so spot on about subjects that you write about. Good luck on the contest.
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2023
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This is really a surprise ending indeed. There was a twist at the end. Like your writing so much. You are always so spot on about subjects that you write about. Good luck on the contest.
Comment Written 07-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2023
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Oh Rosemary I just love you. Thank you so much for the sweet words for my sonnet and your very generous six stars. How very kind of you. I appreciate it so much but I didn't do this one for a contest. I just wanted a little practice writing them, and I find them a little boring. So I just thought I would spice it up a little. You have no idea how much I appreciated it all, but your comments and the stars actually made my nose sting. Lol, Y'know how when you are trying to hold back the tears, well I finally had to let them come. You touched me that much and as I mentioned in the beginning I just love you, my lovely friend.
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so glad that you are my neighbor.
