Sleep, Little One
a children's poem40 total reviews
Comment from country ranch writer
This is so precious I love this it is very beautiful. Great set up and presentation, I can picture you ticking you sweet inevti sleep.
Great job, good luck in the contest.
TuesdayFeb.7-2023.
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2023
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This is so precious I love this it is very beautiful. Great set up and presentation, I can picture you ticking you sweet inevti sleep.
Great job, good luck in the contest.
TuesdayFeb.7-2023.
Comment Written 07-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2023
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Aww, Barbara, you have made my day!! I was on FaceTime with my son and 1 yr. old granddaughter this morning and wrote this just afterwards. There's nothing like inspiration, is there??? LOL. Thanks so much!!
Melissa
Comment from Sarah Tummey
Well-written and could be put to a tune to sing as a lullaby. Have you done that already? It sounds from the poem as if this might have been written about someone close - a child or relative?
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2023
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Well-written and could be put to a tune to sing as a lullaby. Have you done that already? It sounds from the poem as if this might have been written about someone close - a child or relative?
Comment Written 07-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2023
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Aww, Sarah, you have made my day!! I was on FaceTime with my son and 1 yr. old granddaughter this morning and wrote this just afterwards. There's nothing like inspiration, is there??? LOL. Thanks so much!!
Melissa
Comment from Cindy Decker 2
Melissa,
This is a very sweet children's poem, lovingly written.
The photo of the angelic child (is she one of yours)? is beautiful, and complements your tender words.
Good luck, Melissa.
Blessings,
Cindy
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2023
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Melissa,
This is a very sweet children's poem, lovingly written.
The photo of the angelic child (is she one of yours)? is beautiful, and complements your tender words.
Good luck, Melissa.
Blessings,
Cindy
Comment Written 07-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2023
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Hello Cindy. Thank you... I do have a 1 year Le granddaughter, but she is not the one pictured. I'm delighted that you like the poem :)
Melissa
Comment from Pantygynt
A sweet little companion to the picture with with a lilting lullaby appeal. The ballad metre works beautifully with this type of poem and given the right tune one can imagine the mother softly singling the baby to sleep.
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2023
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A sweet little companion to the picture with with a lilting lullaby appeal. The ballad metre works beautifully with this type of poem and given the right tune one can imagine the mother softly singling the baby to sleep.
Comment Written 07-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2023
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Hello Jim... Yvonne said she could hear the music too. Perhaps, I will make up a tune and sing it to Rosalie :). Thank you.
Melissa
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I am sure she will love it.
Comment from jenintorre
This is a truly beautiful poem. It reads like a lullaby. It brings back such happy memories for me of singing and reading stories to my kids and grandkids at bedtime. I think this should do very well in the competition. There seems to be many entries in this catagory but this is the best one that I've read. Good luck. Jen.
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2023
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This is a truly beautiful poem. It reads like a lullaby. It brings back such happy memories for me of singing and reading stories to my kids and grandkids at bedtime. I think this should do very well in the competition. There seems to be many entries in this catagory but this is the best one that I've read. Good luck. Jen.
Comment Written 07-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2023
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Hello Jen. Thank you so much. I had fun writing it this morning after a FaceTime session with our son and his 1 yr. old daughter :). Nothing like inspiration, is there? Thanks again!!
Melissa
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
What a lovely lullaby to gently sing a child to sleep. I love the picture. I enjoyed the words, they way they lull you into dreamland. This is a really nice children's poem for the contest. Well done and good luck! :)Sandra xx
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2023
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What a lovely lullaby to gently sing a child to sleep. I love the picture. I enjoyed the words, they way they lull you into dreamland. This is a really nice children's poem for the contest. Well done and good luck! :)Sandra xx
Comment Written 07-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2023
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Thank you very much Sandra. I was on FaceTime this morning with our son and 1 year old granddaughter and I wrote this afterwards. Nothing like being inspired LOL.
Melissa
Comment from damommy
What a wonderful lullaby this would make if put to music. I can hear it in my head. Anyone would love to hear this as they fall asleep. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2023
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What a wonderful lullaby this would make if put to music. I can hear it in my head. Anyone would love to hear this as they fall asleep. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 07-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2023
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Hello Yvonne. Thank you for your lovely words. I hope to read it to our baby some day :)
Melissa
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Sleep Little One, presented with four ABCB-rhymed quatrains, brings the readers to bedtime for baby and the steps that take her to rest in the arms of Morphias.
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2023
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This poem, Sleep Little One, presented with four ABCB-rhymed quatrains, brings the readers to bedtime for baby and the steps that take her to rest in the arms of Morphias.
Comment Written 07-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2023
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Thank you Bill. I agree that the baby rests in the arms of Morpheus :)
Melissa
Comment from judiverse
What a delightful entry for the children's poetry contest. I enjoy the rhyme, especially the internal rhyme in all the stanzas. Lovely image of the child asleep with his favorite teddy bears. I like "sail to sleep" too. Such a caring mother, there to rock away her child's fears. I think you could dispense with some of those commas, such as those in the next to the last line. judi
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2023
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What a delightful entry for the children's poetry contest. I enjoy the rhyme, especially the internal rhyme in all the stanzas. Lovely image of the child asleep with his favorite teddy bears. I like "sail to sleep" too. Such a caring mother, there to rock away her child's fears. I think you could dispense with some of those commas, such as those in the next to the last line. judi
Comment Written 07-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2023
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Thank you Judi... I will recheck the commas. I am so happy you liked it!!
Melissa
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Thanks so much for your review and comments. I think we get carried away with commas at times. judi
Comment from patcelaw
This is a beautiful poem in the children's poetry contest. I wish you the best in the contest. I really did enjoy that only reading this but listening to it on my iPad. Bless my heart. Thank you so much for such a lovely post. Patricia.
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2023
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This is a beautiful poem in the children's poetry contest. I wish you the best in the contest. I really did enjoy that only reading this but listening to it on my iPad. Bless my heart. Thank you so much for such a lovely post. Patricia.
Comment Written 07-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2023
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Hello Patricia. Thank you so much for the wonderful review. Have a blessed and happy day!
Melissa
