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Hospice Heart

Viewing comments for Chapter 6 "The Expression says it all."
This is a biography of a hospice nurse--me

4 total reviews 
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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I could see where that fear would be a real concern. I am glad you could laugh with the daughters. Thank you for sharing this with us. You are a very compassionate person. That is rare in today's society.

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2023


reply by the author on 17-Feb-2023
    Thank you for reading. I always appreciate your feedback.
Comment from country ranch writer
Exceptional
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It had happened just recently they sent the patient to the funeral fine from the morgue. You can imagine the expression on the funeral homes face when he unzipped the black bag and the patient came awake!
Sunday Feb.-2023.

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2023


reply by the author on 17-Feb-2023
    I would be horrified being the patient and the funeral home.
reply by country ranch writer on 17-Feb-2023
    That?s scary for sure!
reply by country ranch writer on 17-Feb-2023
    That?s scary for sure!
reply by country ranch writer on 17-Feb-2023
    That?s scary for sure!
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2023
    Thanks I will fix that.
Comment from jacquelyn popp
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What a great story. Your words flowed smoothly. This was a good story, and interesting to read, with a sense of humor in it. You did a great description talking about what happened to make the daughters laugh at you. I can just picture the look on your face at that moment. It is good to sometimes laugh at yourself no matter what the situation is. It was good to laugh and relieve some stress maybe for the family. Very well done. Your story was well written. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 11-Feb-2023


reply by the author on 17-Feb-2023
    Thank you for reading and giving feedback.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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I understand, SL. I read recently where that happened,
and the nursing home received a huge fine. You did a
great job describing the scene with George. I believe I
would've felt the same way. I'm glad the daughters
understood. The other incident was funny, too. In the
last line, the word 'to' needs to be 'two.'
Thanks for sharing, Jan

 Comment Written 11-Feb-2023


reply by the author on 17-Feb-2023
    Thanks for reading and for the feedback. I will change that thank you for pointing that out.