Be Wee With Bea Part 3
Viewing comments for Chapter 6 "Many Plans Hatching"Third in a series is quite sad in the beginning.
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Comment from eliz100
I enjoyed reading this chapter. I am getting to know the characters better. It seems Willow is the wise one. I do not see any room for improvement. Have a blessed day.
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2023
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I enjoyed reading this chapter. I am getting to know the characters better. It seems Willow is the wise one. I do not see any room for improvement. Have a blessed day.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2023
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Thank you for your appreciative review. I'm glad you are enjoying this.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Author has visionary power as order of keen sentiment even for about animal such as dogs; power of thinking or planning goes on infinitely; like that when one thinks of something, at the same time other one may be hatching other plans; well said; Review, write for, dedicate post to your God, use time more today; ALCREATOR LITT DEAR (DR)
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2023
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Author has visionary power as order of keen sentiment even for about animal such as dogs; power of thinking or planning goes on infinitely; like that when one thinks of something, at the same time other one may be hatching other plans; well said; Review, write for, dedicate post to your God, use time more today; ALCREATOR LITT DEAR (DR)
Comment Written 13-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2023
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Thank you for your appreciative review. I'm glad you are enjoying this.
Comment from lyenochka
I laughed at "Bea was seriously considering changing Sweet Puppy's name to Not So Sweet Puppy." It does sound like a good idea to notice the transition phases such as the abrupt returning home. If it seemed like Bea was already home, they were not competing to get her attention. It's always good for Bea to have talks with Willow!
Suggestions:
This sentence ran on a bit and wondered if it could be made clearer in two sentences? " In case you do not know who I am, I am the narrarator who was long ago, introduced to Bea by Timothy her furniture carving, clay pot making beaver who had a lodge in what Bea named Timothy's Pond."
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2023
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I laughed at "Bea was seriously considering changing Sweet Puppy's name to Not So Sweet Puppy." It does sound like a good idea to notice the transition phases such as the abrupt returning home. If it seemed like Bea was already home, they were not competing to get her attention. It's always good for Bea to have talks with Willow!
Suggestions:
This sentence ran on a bit and wondered if it could be made clearer in two sentences? " In case you do not know who I am, I am the narrarator who was long ago, introduced to Bea by Timothy her furniture carving, clay pot making beaver who had a lodge in what Bea named Timothy's Pond."
Comment Written 12-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2023
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Thank you for your perceptive review. I used a tiny squirt gun on Sweet Puppy to train her not to hassle scruffles and would say, "Don't hurt 'baby brother" It got so any cat we saw was called baby brother. She even must have stunned the cat across the road when she touched noses with him. So funny & so precious. I actually had to make sure they were in different areas when I came into the house. It was a bit scary. They fought viciously. Zoe's truth will come out in future chapters.
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Interesting! Glad you had a good strategy!
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***Grin***
Comment from Ulla
Hi Liz, this is wonderful. I so enjoyed to read and learn more about this whole extended family of Bea. Young people as well as adults will enjoy reading this..I certainly did. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2023
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Hi Liz, this is wonderful. I so enjoyed to read and learn more about this whole extended family of Bea. Young people as well as adults will enjoy reading this..I certainly did. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 12-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2023
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Thank you for your enthusiastic review. I'm glad you are enjoying it. If you want to read any previous chapters feel free with no review obligations.
Comment from royowen
How delightful living in a cave home, (we actually stayed in a cave hotel in Cappadocia in Turkey some years ago. This is a really good kid's story, just love the animal characters in your great little story Liz, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2023
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How delightful living in a cave home, (we actually stayed in a cave hotel in Cappadocia in Turkey some years ago. This is a really good kid's story, just love the animal characters in your great little story Liz, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 12-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2023
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Thank you fr your appreciative review. I'm glad you enjoyed it. If you want to read the precious chapters, feel free to without having to write a review, just enjoy.
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Thank you Liz
Comment from aryr
This definitely was an eye openers, Liz. Before when I read it, I was interested in the story, then came this chapter. I truly read it differently, this was pack so full of knowledge, which were very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessings n hugs!!!
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2023
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This definitely was an eye openers, Liz. Before when I read it, I was interested in the story, then came this chapter. I truly read it differently, this was pack so full of knowledge, which were very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessings n hugs!!!
Comment Written 12-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2023
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Thank you for your compelling review. I'm glad it got you thinking. I used a tiny squirt gun on Sweet Puppy to train her not to hassle scruffles and would say, "Don't hurt 'baby brother" It got so any cat we saw was called baby brother. She even must have stunned the cat across the road when she touched noses with him. So funny & so precious. I actually had to make sure they were in different areas when I came into the house. It was a bit scary. They fought visciously. Zoe's truth will come out in future chapters.
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Awww, a squirt never hurt. Liz you are so welcome.
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LOL
Comment from Jasmine Girl
The writing style is imaginative and whimsical, with a playful tone throughout. The descriptions of Bea's activities and her interactions with the animals are creative and imaginative, creating a vivid picture in the reader's mind. The narrative is engaging and captures the reader's attention, making it a fun and enjoyable read.
Excellent.
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The writing style is imaginative and whimsical, with a playful tone throughout. The descriptions of Bea's activities and her interactions with the animals are creative and imaginative, creating a vivid picture in the reader's mind. The narrative is engaging and captures the reader's attention, making it a fun and enjoyable read.
Excellent.
Comment Written 12-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2023
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Thank you for your compelling review. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this with us. I enjoyed reading. You did a good job writing.
introduced to Bea by Timothy her furniture carving, clay (comma needed after 'Timothy')
It wasn't that long ago that Sweet Puppy could have forgotten (You can omit the second 'that'. It isn't needed.)
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2023
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Thank you for sharing this with us. I enjoyed reading. You did a good job writing.
introduced to Bea by Timothy her furniture carving, clay (comma needed after 'Timothy')
It wasn't that long ago that Sweet Puppy could have forgotten (You can omit the second 'that'. It isn't needed.)
Comment Written 12-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2023
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Thank you for your alert review. I knew that too many thats sounded awkward...lol
Comment from country ranch writer
Nicely presented and the kids will love Bea as much as I do.It teaches the children to get a long with each other and solve their problems too.Great job Bea has the right idea.
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2023
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Nicely presented and the kids will love Bea as much as I do.It teaches the children to get a long with each other and solve their problems too.Great job Bea has the right idea.
Comment Written 12-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2023
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Thank you for your enthusiastic review. I'm glad you are appreciating it.
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Smiles
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Smiles
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***Smiles back***
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🐎🐎🐎🐎👀🐎🐎🐎👀
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***chuckle***
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Kids will love Bea
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Kids will love Bea
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Thank you...Bea thanks you too.
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Hugs
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Hi Liz, this is the first time I've read this story, it's delightful! I'll have to catch up. I like the way you use different animals and show how they overcome their differences and become friends. The tips that Willow gives out are useful for human carers and parents. What a clever idea to have this written this way. It will delight children and they will learn from it too. Well done!!! :)) Sandra xx
I couldn't work out what was wrong with this sentence. But I think it's missing a word. Perhaps replacing 'ever' to 'to'?
...for Bea. What was she ever do?
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2023
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Hi Liz, this is the first time I've read this story, it's delightful! I'll have to catch up. I like the way you use different animals and show how they overcome their differences and become friends. The tips that Willow gives out are useful for human carers and parents. What a clever idea to have this written this way. It will delight children and they will learn from it too. Well done!!! :)) Sandra xx
I couldn't work out what was wrong with this sentence. But I think it's missing a word. Perhaps replacing 'ever' to 'to'?
...for Bea. What was she ever do?
Comment Written 12-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2023
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Thank you for your insightful review. I'm glad you enjoyed it. If you read previous chapters, there is no need for a review, just enjoy.
