One Thousand Cranes
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Comment from lyenochka
Great use of imagery and alliteration in your poem! I could see the sound waves of the bell tolling moving into the hearts of the mourners. And the cups of the flowers are full of grieving, too.
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reply by the author on 12-Feb-2023
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Great use of imagery and alliteration in your poem! I could see the sound waves of the bell tolling moving into the hearts of the mourners. And the cups of the flowers are full of grieving, too.
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Comment Written 12-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2023
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Big Sister, thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem, Love you.
MariVal
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